Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/20/21, 10:51 PM
Great story addition. I hope we see some more transformations though.
5/20/21, 10:45 PM
This is one of my favorites! Great writing about some of my favorite themes!!
May 20, 2021
5/20/21, 5:37 PM
MMMMMMM.... that was hot!
May 20, 2021
5/20/21, 4:05 PM
Short and sweet! Love the twist
5/20/21, 3:51 PM
Very kinky and well written
5/20/21, 7:09 AM
hottt

5/20/21, 1:14 PM
@Jonanator Glad you enjoyed it. Working on Part 2 soon!
boi98229
5/20/21, 5:44 AM
Thanks so much, Hypno-Tales, for this sexy and very entertaining story. You did a wonderful job of describing Mowgli's brainwashing. The depths to which you had Kaa take Mowgli's trance and his sense of absolute obedience and devotion were amazing! I felt like going into trance myself and was able to stay just conscious enough to continue reading. If you will forgive me for being too direct, your English is somewhat awkward in places. Strangely though in this context, with my mind rather fuzzy anyway, it seemed so much like English poetry where the essence of the message was more important than the way things were worded. Any errors in wording or sentence structure didn't seem in my mind to make any difference to your wonderful story-telling.

5/20/21, 9:07 AM
@boi98229 Oh, thank you very much for your comment. I have loved reading it and being able to hear that you enjoyed the story, I appreciate your words very much and I am very satisfied that I have made you have a good time reading my story. :) I really wanted to put a lot of emphasis on those details that you mention, the depth of the trance, the absolute and delicious feeling of submission and devotion to his master. Hopefully this summer I will be able to finish one of the three new stories that I still have unfinished. I have nothing to forgive, don't worry ^w^. Certainly my English is strange, although I hope it is understandable. First I wrote the text in Spanish and then I gradually translated it into English (for me it is easier to do so), so it is likely that many sentences maintain a structure similar to Spanish, resulting in that peculiar result. Anyway, please, if you find a serious error that makes it difficult to understand, I would appreciate it if you mention it so that I can fix it. Thank you very much for your comment. :)
Anonymous
5/20/21, 5:03 AM
Love this series! Please keep going!