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5/19/21, 5:18 AM
I would say do it all in one. More story is **always** better!

5/19/21, 9:58 AM
Alright sounds good. I will hopefully have it out over the next few days 😄@Uncle Arctos
5/19/21, 5:00 AM
love this. would be thrilled to see a part 2+.
nycboot
5/19/21, 1:33 AM
Somehow I missed this when I came out. Bravo - excellent. I almost wish it was longer. But you do the thing that I like: have a remnant of the guy's personality so he knows he's turning, but doesn't realize where it's coming from and thus is powerless to do anything about it. And not only was it hot, it made me smile and chuckle when I reached the end. :) So again: bravo!
5/18/21, 5:23 AM
Tomozco, Love it. Can't wait for the next episode. Can you work it into father/son oblivious entrancement with the wife entranced doing the bidding of the club, maybe as the house domm. The two men now slaves of the club and will be programmed to sleep in 69-style possibly...dress in rubber....serve others at the club but not just feet, if you know what I mean... (Maybe like the hostile takeover story you had a few years back (son gets kidnapped along with father, company taken over and the two forced to do "unspeakable" things for an middle eastern master's guest, etc...) Keep it going and please don't disappear again. As you can tell your work has a lot of followers. Reprogramming, oblivious entranced enslavement, almost robotic actions by drone slaves...all great stuff you've touched on many times.

5/18/21, 4:52 PM
Thanks for your kind comment and suggestions, @bmax! I will keep all suggestions in mind, and I might throw in some of the ideas if they fit with the flow of the plot. Although as I mentioned already, I'll not likely involve the wife much anymore, especially not in taking part in any "actions", since it's not part of the main flow and not in my interest either. But thanks for your input regardless! ;)

5/19/21, 1:20 AM
@tomozco Tomozco, thanks for the reposnse. Hope to see the next chapter soon. I'm sure everyone is waiting with bated breath. all the best.
Whitewolf78
5/18/21, 7:51 PM
nice! I love your island story and i loveeeee this one! I'd really really love to see it continued! Maybe even find out how Collin and Chris met as a flashback?

5/19/21, 12:18 AM
@Whitewolf78 Thanks! And glad you enjoyed them. Continuing either is always a possibility. Most probably I'd see myself throwing out a random Island chapter. A lost chapter, or maybe a "after the island" chapter. I've been thinking of random spinoff oneoffs.
Anonymous
5/18/21, 11:34 PM
Like the story and personally I like pictures in stories.
Anonymous
5/18/21, 11:25 PM
patiently awaiting more, this has so much potential to mess with historical figures
5/18/21, 8:28 PM
I hope this story continues.
5/18/21, 4:02 PM
hope to c part 3......^w^
5/18/21, 1:59 PM
I like this one, will we see a mass transformation someday?