Recent Comments

5/17/21, 11:06 PM
I hope to see part 3 soon, why not make the third person into a daddy?
5/17/21, 9:36 PM
For those reading this story -- thank you! I finally got around to expanding this into the novel as I always knew it was. You can find a sneak peak [HERE](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10001730) on the GSS. Or you can just go to Amazon directly and get a paperback or ebook download [HERE](https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0948LL6WW/ref=ppx_yo_dt_b_asin_image_o00_s00?ie=UTF8&psc=1) It's fun to compare the short story to the novel to see where I jumped the tracks....
Marc
5/17/21, 8:37 PM
Hot story. It's short and efficient. Great stuff to wank :)
Marc
5/17/21, 8:26 PM
Thank you for this story that is hot, easy to read and understand. And the events are quite well described. Maybe a sequel?
5/16/21, 4:21 PM
Ooooh! A new chapter! I'll save it for tomorrow XD Can't wait to read it!

5/16/21, 5:17 PM
@Nocturismo Good to see you in the comments of this chapter! I see we're appreciating each other's stories! :)

5/17/21, 4:22 AM
Good god, this is yet another hot chapter! AND SO WHOLESOME!!! The dynamic between the two are so sweet! and the setting is just splendid, totally want to learn more about the lore of The system @ITO-K

5/17/21, 7:52 PM
@Nocturismo I'm glad you like the dynamic between Noel and 107 and that the story has a rather wholesome setting. In the next chapter, a little bit of lore will be added about a drone-type which was not introduced before. It's rather... "forceful" what's happening to this type of drone compared to what 107 and Noel are experiencing.

Martin
5/17/21, 8:18 PM
@ITO-K You tease us just to keep us waiting for so many weeks... 😣 I was wondering what a B-Drone would be. And I'm so excited for Noel!
Anonymous
5/17/21, 8:08 PM
Ah well. I'm here hoping for the next chapter
Anonymous
5/17/21, 10:25 AM
Great story! We all would love you to keep writing!

5/17/21, 7:56 PM
Thanks! If the last ten years has proven anything, it's that I'll keep getting horny and turning out stories 😉
5/17/21, 5:50 PM
Thank you, thank you, thank you. This was beautiful. The way you managed to make it so emotionally driven and weave that core through all of the action... just brilliant. You deserve all the accolades you've gotten, and I hope you're as happy with the results as the GSS readership is. Spectacular work!

5/17/21, 7:53 PM
@Noam de Pluma Thank you so much! I'm thrilled with the story and touched with the reception it's gotten. Glad to see so many people care about Willem and Jake like I do!
EntrancedGay92
5/16/21, 3:54 PM
Overall a good addition, but I don't really care for the plot twist involving the mom. It really ruins the erotic vibe of an otherwise hot story.

5/17/21, 1:06 AM
Thanks for your feedback @EntrancedGay92. I understand your point, and trust me, I'm as gay as they come and female characters in gay sex stories don't usually entice me much either. :) The main reason I included that passage was simply to point out that the Club had already taken control of Ron's entire family to watch over Ron and Chris, and it was all done by having Ron slip the training audio to everyone yet he wasn't at all aware consciously of his own doing. I don't expect the wife to appear again in the story, other than perhaps anectodal mentions in passing.

EntrancedGay92
5/17/21, 11:11 AM
@tomozco I totally get it from the perspective of the plot!! Right after I hit "submit" I saw you had already explained the 'why' behind the inclusion lol. But in a way, I'm glad she was included because it paves the way for Ron and Chris to be compeltely good boys :D

5/17/21, 5:31 PM
@EntrancedGay92 You've got it! Cheers! 😉
5/17/21, 5:18 PM
Such a hot story! Loved the sneaker and gear theft and cant wait for the next chapter!