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5/18/21, 1:59 PM
I like this one, will we see a mass transformation someday?
5/18/21, 7:17 AM
@ Martin, this has got me wondering what the difference will be between a B-Done and a T-Drone, like others have said I can't wait for the next chapter. I love wearing rubber myself, so this it hitting the mark for me on all aspects

5/18/21, 10:38 AM
@MalSkin If you want to learn more about T-Drones, make sure to read this chapter: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/1704800
5/18/21, 5:53 AM
Yeah I agree, will be good to see what happens when Daniel sees his wife again and how his therapy with Billy Bonker has taken hold, and how poisonous "bleach" is
Anonymous
6/12/18, 11:39 AM
Fuck Pls part 2 where the two devils get their penalty. need happi endin'

5/18/21, 3:41 AM
I cannot disagree more. Why shouldn't the antagonist win? It's a mind control story. Not a mind control overcoming story. And it IS a happy ending. It's the beet year ever. More than one considering how many times I've cum reading this.
5/15/21, 6:35 PM
excited to read more although you mentioned writing it down with the pen will make a more permanent affect. Does that mean it's possible for them to snap back to reality? You show it can automatically change reality but also imply make a hold on someone permanent be interesting if something wore off over time. Loved the suit scene it was very sexy.

5/15/21, 9:25 PM
@nerdysuitedbaby I have some ideas around things wearing off - but the plan was that if it's written down, it's permanent, and it can't be overwritten by anything else. :)

5/18/21, 2:52 AM
@sb jb mc I like that best part for me is at times when they fight back only to fall right back into place.
Kent
5/18/21, 12:33 AM
i hope theres a moment where things start to go wrong, either by consequence or power taken
5/17/21, 11:06 PM
I hope to see part 3 soon, why not make the third person into a daddy?
5/17/21, 9:36 PM
For those reading this story -- thank you! I finally got around to expanding this into the novel as I always knew it was. You can find a sneak peak [HERE](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10001730) on the GSS. Or you can just go to Amazon directly and get a paperback or ebook download [HERE](https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0948LL6WW/ref=ppx_yo_dt_b_asin_image_o00_s00?ie=UTF8&psc=1) It's fun to compare the short story to the novel to see where I jumped the tracks....
Marc
5/17/21, 8:37 PM
Hot story. It's short and efficient. Great stuff to wank :)
Marc
5/17/21, 8:26 PM
Thank you for this story that is hot, easy to read and understand. And the events are quite well described. Maybe a sequel?