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Anonymous
6/12/18, 11:39 AM
Fuck Pls part 2 where the two devils get their penalty. need happi endin'

5/18/21, 3:41 AM
I cannot disagree more. Why shouldn't the antagonist win? It's a mind control story. Not a mind control overcoming story. And it IS a happy ending. It's the beet year ever. More than one considering how many times I've cum reading this.
5/15/21, 6:35 PM
excited to read more although you mentioned writing it down with the pen will make a more permanent affect. Does that mean it's possible for them to snap back to reality? You show it can automatically change reality but also imply make a hold on someone permanent be interesting if something wore off over time. Loved the suit scene it was very sexy.

5/15/21, 9:25 PM
@nerdysuitedbaby I have some ideas around things wearing off - but the plan was that if it's written down, it's permanent, and it can't be overwritten by anything else. :)

5/18/21, 2:52 AM
@sb jb mc I like that best part for me is at times when they fight back only to fall right back into place.
Kent
5/18/21, 12:33 AM
i hope theres a moment where things start to go wrong, either by consequence or power taken
5/17/21, 11:06 PM
I hope to see part 3 soon, why not make the third person into a daddy?
5/17/21, 9:36 PM
For those reading this story -- thank you! I finally got around to expanding this into the novel as I always knew it was. You can find a sneak peak [HERE](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10001730) on the GSS. Or you can just go to Amazon directly and get a paperback or ebook download [HERE](https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0948LL6WW/ref=ppx_yo_dt_b_asin_image_o00_s00?ie=UTF8&psc=1) It's fun to compare the short story to the novel to see where I jumped the tracks....
Marc
5/17/21, 8:37 PM
Hot story. It's short and efficient. Great stuff to wank :)
Marc
5/17/21, 8:26 PM
Thank you for this story that is hot, easy to read and understand. And the events are quite well described. Maybe a sequel?
5/16/21, 4:21 PM
Ooooh! A new chapter! I'll save it for tomorrow XD Can't wait to read it!

5/16/21, 5:17 PM
@Nocturismo Good to see you in the comments of this chapter! I see we're appreciating each other's stories! :)

5/17/21, 4:22 AM
Good god, this is yet another hot chapter! AND SO WHOLESOME!!! The dynamic between the two are so sweet! and the setting is just splendid, totally want to learn more about the lore of The system @ITO-K

5/17/21, 7:52 PM
@Nocturismo I'm glad you like the dynamic between Noel and 107 and that the story has a rather wholesome setting. In the next chapter, a little bit of lore will be added about a drone-type which was not introduced before. It's rather... "forceful" what's happening to this type of drone compared to what 107 and Noel are experiencing.

Martin
5/17/21, 8:18 PM
@ITO-K You tease us just to keep us waiting for so many weeks... 😣 I was wondering what a B-Drone would be. And I'm so excited for Noel!
Anonymous
5/17/21, 8:08 PM
Ah well. I'm here hoping for the next chapter
Anonymous
5/17/21, 10:25 AM
Great story! We all would love you to keep writing!

5/17/21, 7:56 PM
Thanks! If the last ten years has proven anything, it's that I'll keep getting horny and turning out stories 😉