Recent Comments

EntrancedGay92
5/16/21, 3:54 PM
Overall a good addition, but I don't really care for the plot twist involving the mom. It really ruins the erotic vibe of an otherwise hot story.

5/17/21, 1:06 AM
Thanks for your feedback @EntrancedGay92. I understand your point, and trust me, I'm as gay as they come and female characters in gay sex stories don't usually entice me much either. :) The main reason I included that passage was simply to point out that the Club had already taken control of Ron's entire family to watch over Ron and Chris, and it was all done by having Ron slip the training audio to everyone yet he wasn't at all aware consciously of his own doing. I don't expect the wife to appear again in the story, other than perhaps anectodal mentions in passing.

EntrancedGay92
5/17/21, 11:11 AM
@tomozco I totally get it from the perspective of the plot!! Right after I hit "submit" I saw you had already explained the 'why' behind the inclusion lol. But in a way, I'm glad she was included because it paves the way for Ron and Chris to be compeltely good boys :D

5/17/21, 5:31 PM
@EntrancedGay92 You've got it! Cheers! πŸ˜‰
5/17/21, 5:18 PM
Such a hot story! Loved the sneaker and gear theft and cant wait for the next chapter!
5/17/21, 2:29 PM
Too hot for me! But still wished that superman could return! I like the way you describe how superman's muscle shrink in the control of parasite!
5/17/21, 10:23 AM
Quick and clever.
Anonymous
5/17/21, 8:03 AM
amaxing, cock shrink is one of my favs but it hardly wver gets puished yhanks man
5/17/21, 2:36 AM
maybe the God Cock can be his son, turning his own father
5/17/21, 1:11 AM
Thanks guys for the quick feedbacks! I appreciate and enjoy your comments on the story. Whether good or bad, I welcome your constructive inputs to help me improve!
5/16/21, 12:42 AM
@ArdanWolfe well, that's what I mean about keeping my mouth shut. I'm ALWAYS interested in supporting a good writing, I just shouldn't say stuff that MIGHT be your next chapter. ;)

5/16/21, 12:47 AM
Well sometimes comments like that give inspiration though. Like the cop thing, my next chapter mentions cops doing a wellness check, but I hadn't thought of having them actually being part of the story arch....now though it would be totally logical for them to undergo the process. @Papa Werebear

5/16/21, 1:25 AM
@ArdanWolfe OK, so, you have NO idea how turned on I am at the cops being transformed! That's so fucking HOT! <3

5/17/21, 1:09 AM
No pressure then 🀣🀣. Well the story kind of writes itself and just pulls me along for the ride. And it intrigued me enough that I actually think the cop part will do better in the chapter I'm currently working on so not too much longer 😁@Uncle Arctos
Martin
5/16/21, 8:34 PM
Fuuuuck... you just can't stop right there!!! Now we have to wait for months again... I can't stand this... This has got to be the cutes, hottest most wholesome drone conversion story I've ever read... Perfectness!

5/17/21, 12:32 AM
@Martin I can't agree more with you! (ΟƒοΎŸβˆ€οΎŸ)Οƒ..:*
5/17/21, 12:00 AM
very hot story so glad your still writing for it. Big fan of your all your work man