Recent Comments

5/15/21, 11:42 PM
This series is quite hot! I only wish we got regular updates for it

5/16/21, 2:37 PM
Thanks @Kyle Chu! Yes, I've got to admit it's a combination of laziness, and also not finding enough time, motivation and inspiration to sit down and write out the ideas. One would think that with the lockdown there'd be tons of free time....😋 I'll try to keep up a little better haha.

5/16/21, 5:20 PM
@tomozco I get it man. Just keep going at your own pace. I'm just glad that we're getting your updates once in a while!
5/16/21, 4:16 PM
awesome i'm also sure i will enjoy this chapter a lot thanks for the update and continue like that :D

5/16/21, 5:16 PM
@Bazir You're welcome! :)
boi98229
5/16/21, 4:52 PM
Hey Ethan, I thought you did a good job of writing, and I did enjoy it, but the concept was old without anything new or unexpected added into the story.
Daddy Chad
5/16/21, 3:52 PM
Need more of this! Beautiful writing.
Martin
5/16/21, 12:44 PM
I can't wait to read this later this evening. My dick is leaking just thinking about it ... :)

5/16/21, 2:49 PM
@Martin Haha, I hope you will enjoy this chapter! Make sure to let me know afterwards.
Dec 11, 2012
Anonymous
5/16/21, 2:45 PM
Aww, that was nice.
5/16/21, 2:30 PM
I liked the story but was confused by the description. I'd word it like, " makes his handler submit"
5/14/21, 10:38 PM
Will this become a series?

5/14/21, 11:01 PM
@darkblade2814 - Yes it will be :) Four chapters are written, working on the 5th now.

5/14/21, 11:10 PM
@sb jb mc cool, looking forewords to more

5/16/21, 1:14 PM
@sb jb mcThank you!
5/16/21, 12:45 AM
Great work as always, Derek! A very hot story. Loved your creative twist on the Twilight Zone.

5/16/21, 5:25 AM
Thanks @Hypnoguy67 :) I suspect we'll get to visit this universe many times, this is something I've been considering for a while.

5/16/21, 12:54 PM
Consider me along for the ride, @Derek Williams. Looking forward to future chapters!
5/16/21, 7:48 AM
ohh I cant wait for the next part. This is so good

5/16/21, 12:40 PM
@jade I'm happy to hear you've enjoyed this part of the story! :)