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5/15/21, 1:21 AM
Very well executed - nicely done!
5/15/21, 12:02 AM
Nice work w the clan sex and getting rid of sexual taboos. All men should live in groups, or "packs" as I call them, "clan" as you do in this story. And nothing like a sore jaw after sucking cock and eating ass. Little did Billy know how great his life was going to become when he left his girlfriend in Ch 1. And now in a true clan of five men. Oh, and I want Eddie to fuck me too.

5/15/21, 12:19 AM
Well the story has really evolved beyond what I first thought it could be. I am truly enjoying the road it's taking me down. And an very happy you are enjoying as well 😄@PupScout
5/15/21, 12:02 AM
I'd been reading this series every step of the way, and I love it! thank you for creating it and sharing it with us!

5/15/21, 12:14 AM
@Cock TF Boi You're so welcome!
5/14/21, 11:36 PM
where is the rating for tears ive cried geez this is amazing writing though 💖
5/14/21, 10:16 PM
An excellent ending to a fantastic series. I lost count of how many times I jerked off to stories in this series. Hot as hell and very well written. Thank you.

5/14/21, 10:20 PM
@ControlMe That's always the highest praise!
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5/14/21, 8:49 PM
so excited....ordered a copy from Amazon....it arrives tomorrow!!!

5/14/21, 9:16 PM
I am very appreciative! I hope you enjoy it! Please leave a review!
5/14/21, 8:35 PM
This chapter is just as good as the first. I like seeing Renslo trying to escape and failing, then eventually giving in and actively deciding to become one part of the dragon's hoard. The statue fucking was definitely a turn-on for me, and I don't think I really realized that until now. I almost wish the statue had been Charroweir in disguise, but I think something similar to that happened in a different story o read somewhere. (Don't ask me where, because I don't remember.) But what really is great about this story is that the dom/sub dynamic is caring. Charroweir seems to have been longing for a treasure that is, while not being his equal, something more of a companion. This is the type of relationship I like. As for where this could go, perhaps Charroweir uses Kethend's thieving skills to obtain more treasure of the gem variety. Or he uses Kethend's physical attributes to obtain a new bedroom treasure?
5/14/21, 4:58 AM
when is the next chapter?

5/14/21, 8:35 PM
I know it has been a long wait. I am currently working on another series, that has taken a lot of my focus. After I finish it I plan to come back and wrap up my cliffhanger stories. @PuertoRicanGay
5/14/21, 6:53 PM
love this hope to keep seeing more chapters
5/14/21, 12:41 PM
When I was in college -- where, coincidentally, Serling taught -- we used to have Twilight Zone marathon weekends. Oh, how I love that show! So I can't help but wish the Rainbow Zone a long and healthy run! At least five seasons, so it will hit syndication! Great job!

5/14/21, 4:03 PM
That's really awesome @absman420 — did you ever get to study with him? I posted a Serling video on Discord while I was doing research for this story. Serling was discussing writing with a group of students for quite some time, and I found myself struck by how eloquent and thoughtful he was, even in spoken form. I think he would have been interesting to study under.

5/14/21, 4:08 PM
@Derek Williams I was fortunate enough to attend a master class. story above all -- everything in service to the story also, stories are about discovery -- the protagonist and the reader discover reasons to keep moving forward

5/14/21, 6:50 PM
@absman420 You're too cool. I like the idea of discovery as a driver. I'll keep that in mind as I write my next story.