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5/14/21, 8:35 PM
This chapter is just as good as the first. I like seeing Renslo trying to escape and failing, then eventually giving in and actively deciding to become one part of the dragon's hoard. The statue fucking was definitely a turn-on for me, and I don't think I really realized that until now. I almost wish the statue had been Charroweir in disguise, but I think something similar to that happened in a different story o read somewhere. (Don't ask me where, because I don't remember.) But what really is great about this story is that the dom/sub dynamic is caring. Charroweir seems to have been longing for a treasure that is, while not being his equal, something more of a companion. This is the type of relationship I like. As for where this could go, perhaps Charroweir uses Kethend's thieving skills to obtain more treasure of the gem variety. Or he uses Kethend's physical attributes to obtain a new bedroom treasure?
5/14/21, 4:58 AM
when is the next chapter?

5/14/21, 8:35 PM
I know it has been a long wait. I am currently working on another series, that has taken a lot of my focus. After I finish it I plan to come back and wrap up my cliffhanger stories. @PuertoRicanGay
5/14/21, 6:53 PM
love this hope to keep seeing more chapters
5/14/21, 12:41 PM
When I was in college -- where, coincidentally, Serling taught -- we used to have Twilight Zone marathon weekends. Oh, how I love that show! So I can't help but wish the Rainbow Zone a long and healthy run! At least five seasons, so it will hit syndication! Great job!

5/14/21, 4:03 PM
That's really awesome @absman420 — did you ever get to study with him? I posted a Serling video on Discord while I was doing research for this story. Serling was discussing writing with a group of students for quite some time, and I found myself struck by how eloquent and thoughtful he was, even in spoken form. I think he would have been interesting to study under.

5/14/21, 4:08 PM
@Derek Williams I was fortunate enough to attend a master class. story above all -- everything in service to the story also, stories are about discovery -- the protagonist and the reader discover reasons to keep moving forward

5/14/21, 6:50 PM
@absman420 You're too cool. I like the idea of discovery as a driver. I'll keep that in mind as I write my next story.
Anonymous
5/13/21, 1:36 PM
This has been a great read - really love the story. Great character development with sexy erotica. I don't suppose we have any chance of a sequel following Josh and the twins handling the curse with Willem and Jake in supporting roles. I could definitely see some seriously sexy shenanigans with a trio of bottoms!

5/13/21, 1:48 PM
@ You never know! If I came up with an idea for a new curse, I could totally see that. And you KNOW the twins would have to end up fucking each other at some point.

5/14/21, 6:03 PM
@Freckleman64 Make them lovers <3
5/14/21, 3:52 PM
Very good! I as I finished the story, I could *hear* the Twilight Zone theme playing. Really clever!

5/14/21, 4:37 PM
@el mexicano 4091 Hehe.... that's really awesome to hear. Here's to many more.
Anonymous
5/14/21, 2:37 PM
excellent work thank you very much

5/14/21, 4:14 PM
Thank you Anon!
nycboot
5/14/21, 2:19 PM
Hehe, as a fan of the original Twilight Zone I really got into this. Thank you!

5/14/21, 4:14 PM
Thanks @nycboot! I'm a fan too (obviously!) Glad I didn't do it a disservice.
5/14/21, 1:14 PM
I love this story & series universe! I know it was barely even a minor plot element here, but one of my FAVORITE scenarios, is when the pathway to escaping domination and control is frustrated by removing basic capabilities, such as becoming too short to operate a simple doorknob or not being able to form the correct words to get help, when help is simply an ask away. In this story, Sam removing Ethan's ability to read so he could no longer use the app & thus fully subjected to Sam's whims.... I just about popped a nut right there!

5/14/21, 4:13 PM
Thanks @boyn2changes! I wanted to make Ethan helpless and trapped with his choices. My outline notes for this story had Ethan and Sam going gay, but the world wasn't oblivious, so Ethan had to break up with Brandi. Ethan would get a DM and automatically start texting back during the breakup. She would grab the phone, call Ethan a sex obsessed whore, which the phone would pick up on (it worked more like siri in the first outline), and throw it into the ocean. But I ended up liking this better. I'm glad it worked for you :D
5/14/21, 10:25 AM
Can't wait for the next parts...

5/14/21, 4:05 PM
@Hypno-Jason My current plan is for this to be a stand alone story. I will write others with similar themes.