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5/14/21, 11:36 PM
where is the rating for tears ive cried geez this is amazing writing though 💖
5/14/21, 10:16 PM
An excellent ending to a fantastic series. I lost count of how many times I jerked off to stories in this series. Hot as hell and very well written. Thank you.

5/14/21, 10:20 PM
@ControlMe That's always the highest praise!
Anonymous
5/14/21, 8:49 PM
so excited....ordered a copy from Amazon....it arrives tomorrow!!!

5/14/21, 9:16 PM
I am very appreciative! I hope you enjoy it! Please leave a review!
5/14/21, 8:35 PM
This chapter is just as good as the first. I like seeing Renslo trying to escape and failing, then eventually giving in and actively deciding to become one part of the dragon's hoard. The statue fucking was definitely a turn-on for me, and I don't think I really realized that until now. I almost wish the statue had been Charroweir in disguise, but I think something similar to that happened in a different story o read somewhere. (Don't ask me where, because I don't remember.) But what really is great about this story is that the dom/sub dynamic is caring. Charroweir seems to have been longing for a treasure that is, while not being his equal, something more of a companion. This is the type of relationship I like. As for where this could go, perhaps Charroweir uses Kethend's thieving skills to obtain more treasure of the gem variety. Or he uses Kethend's physical attributes to obtain a new bedroom treasure?
5/14/21, 4:58 AM
when is the next chapter?

5/14/21, 8:35 PM
I know it has been a long wait. I am currently working on another series, that has taken a lot of my focus. After I finish it I plan to come back and wrap up my cliffhanger stories. @PuertoRicanGay
5/14/21, 6:53 PM
love this hope to keep seeing more chapters
5/14/21, 12:41 PM
When I was in college -- where, coincidentally, Serling taught -- we used to have Twilight Zone marathon weekends. Oh, how I love that show! So I can't help but wish the Rainbow Zone a long and healthy run! At least five seasons, so it will hit syndication! Great job!

5/14/21, 4:03 PM
That's really awesome @absman420 — did you ever get to study with him? I posted a Serling video on Discord while I was doing research for this story. Serling was discussing writing with a group of students for quite some time, and I found myself struck by how eloquent and thoughtful he was, even in spoken form. I think he would have been interesting to study under.

5/14/21, 4:08 PM
@Derek Williams I was fortunate enough to attend a master class. story above all -- everything in service to the story also, stories are about discovery -- the protagonist and the reader discover reasons to keep moving forward

5/14/21, 6:50 PM
@absman420 You're too cool. I like the idea of discovery as a driver. I'll keep that in mind as I write my next story.
Anonymous
5/13/21, 1:36 PM
This has been a great read - really love the story. Great character development with sexy erotica. I don't suppose we have any chance of a sequel following Josh and the twins handling the curse with Willem and Jake in supporting roles. I could definitely see some seriously sexy shenanigans with a trio of bottoms!

5/13/21, 1:48 PM
@ You never know! If I came up with an idea for a new curse, I could totally see that. And you KNOW the twins would have to end up fucking each other at some point.

5/14/21, 6:03 PM
@Freckleman64 Make them lovers <3
5/14/21, 3:52 PM
Very good! I as I finished the story, I could *hear* the Twilight Zone theme playing. Really clever!

5/14/21, 4:37 PM
@el mexicano 4091 Hehe.... that's really awesome to hear. Here's to many more.
Anonymous
5/14/21, 2:37 PM
excellent work thank you very much

5/14/21, 4:14 PM
Thank you Anon!