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Anonymous
5/14/21, 11:30 AM
Really cool story, just wondering how this mistake can be fixed now? What will happen to the protagonist?
Evan
5/14/21, 11:28 AM
I really enjoyed this. Great concept. Would love to see more. So nice of him to show all his friends how great the game is.
5/14/21, 11:00 AM
I will admit that I thought the series was just so-so at the beginning, but as Jese continues to transform into a cockslut bottom (hopefully, sub?) I find it hotter and hotter. Keep going. I want to see Jese as a helpless fuck slave of Charles.
5/13/21, 10:04 PM
absman420, is there a picture or specific person that inspired Dom's character?

5/14/21, 10:06 AM
@Nurseboy Not really, no. He's just everyman
Evan
5/14/21, 8:45 AM
Cool idea and fun story! sta
5/14/21, 8:09 AM
hottt, hope there is a sequel.
5/14/21, 1:32 AM
As a super-fan of "The Twilight Zone," I loved every minute of this! The descriptions of transformations are hot as always, but you also successfully captured Rod Serling's social commentary bent--in this case, the danger of what it means to be a TikTok star and how the desperate need for attention can be a curse. Plus you snagged Serling's great irony: Ethan has tons of ATTENTION, but no CONNECTION any longer. He's become a print ad himself--unreal, a glossy magazine picture that everyone loves but nobody sees. Brilliant stuff!

5/14/21, 5:40 AM
Thanks @Feed Your Head! It felt like a clumsy job compared to Serling, so I'm glad to see some of the themes came through.
5/14/21, 12:55 AM
Fantastic! I absolutely loved it, and cant wait to see more in the future!

5/14/21, 5:30 AM
Thank ye' @Jeep!
5/14/21, 12:40 AM
I'm a big fan both of most of the themes you included on this story and the Twilight Zone. You made a great job in capturing the essence of the show. I'll be waiting for the next, episode!

5/14/21, 5:30 AM
Thanks @Plymouth58! I'm glad to hear it felt like the right essence.
5/14/21, 4:38 AM
Man, forget the boy, I would bang his dad! <3