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5/14/21, 12:55 AM
Fantastic! I absolutely loved it, and cant wait to see more in the future!

5/14/21, 5:30 AM
Thank ye' @Jeep!
5/14/21, 12:40 AM
I'm a big fan both of most of the themes you included on this story and the Twilight Zone. You made a great job in capturing the essence of the show. I'll be waiting for the next, episode!

5/14/21, 5:30 AM
Thanks @Plymouth58! I'm glad to hear it felt like the right essence.
5/14/21, 4:38 AM
Man, forget the boy, I would bang his dad! <3
Evan
5/14/21, 4:03 AM
Thank you for this series and for finishing it. I have been very emotionally invested in these characters and I'm thrilled at the sweet, romantic ending. I also like the lack of fanfare in the ending. they are together and living their lives. What a perfect end for them after such a journey.

5/14/21, 4:28 AM
@Evan Thank you so much! I figured after all the hell they'd been through they deserved something sweet and simple.
5/2/21, 11:27 PM
I'm so torn, part me thinks that since he's used his perfect body to exploit others that his coup de grace would be to lose his good looks and muscles. Unable to ever pick up a weight again and always giving in to his crazings to stuff his face with unhealthy foods. Maybe even have him be the special guest at next years cruise and have him be a busboy while everyone treats him like dirt and ridicules how he's really let himself go . Buuuuuuttttt, it would be such a shame to waste such a perfect body. Maybe have it where his only motivation for continuing the upkeep of his physique is the attention from lesser men. He just can't walk by a balding dad bod without having that guy validate his body in some way. That could be fun too. Amazing story. Great setup. I'm very invested b/c youve done such a marvelous job setting this guy up as a huge douche who deserves everything coming to him.

5/14/21, 4:25 AM
@JHunter Love the validation idea. thanks
5/14/21, 3:49 AM
This story was amazing, and the ending certainly did not disappoint. You're an incredibly talented writer; thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.

5/14/21, 3:54 AM
@Hypnoguy67 You're so welcome! Thank you for the kind words.
5/13/21, 1:33 PM
Oh. My. God. AMAZING. I've been checking the site every day (multiple times, even!) for this finale...and it did NOT disappoint. Everything about it was gorgeous, but most of all the note Jake wrote and the coffee shop scene. I also loved Bussy's scene with Willem--it showed the heart under her magic (and chicken cutlets!); Willem's mother's lines, too, were perfect: the hinting at "It's OK if you're gay" was spot on. You also tied together every other thread beautifully (the politician's destroyed campaign, Jeffrey's curse, etc.). I also want to applaud you for diving into the thorny issue of love, sex, and the blurred line between them; Willem's identity, sexual orientation, and physical attraction are complicated topics, but you dove into that complicated issue with grace and open-mindedness. Most of all, though, this story speaks to a larger narrative in the gay male community--the loneliness we face. Your description of the emptiness was so spot on...it put into words how I've felt about someone for a long time. It can never be enough, but all I can say is...thank you. You have a true gift.

5/13/21, 1:43 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you thank you!! Your comments in particular have been so motivating as I wrote this story. The loneliness of being closeted, sex addiction, and drug addiction was definitely in the forefront of my mind writing this. Although even just being a happy, well-adjusted gay man still comes with its own major dose of loneliness! But the opposite of addiction is connection, as Willem learned. And I certainly feel more connected and less alone having written this story for you guys and for myself.

5/14/21, 1:21 AM
@Freckleman64 ...no. No, no, no. That's not FAIR. You cannot just drop one of the wisest things I've heard in ages--"the opposite of addiction is connection"--and just walk away like that! And how am I supposed to use it in conversation? "Wow, that's so wise, who told you that?" "Oh, an author." "What author?" "...well, he wrote a story about a pun-loving drag queen who hexes a guy into having a giant ass unless 100 guys fuck him." "..." "No, there's more to it than that!" :p But seriously, that is an amazing idea. As someone who's struggled with addiction issues (and watched friends and family struggle with it, too), it's so true. Addictions isolate you and make you feel like the only thing in the world is the thing you're craving. But friends and love are the cures for that--real connection. Such beauty... As SC Walker said down below, I'd love to chat with you in person to hear more of your thoughts. Would that be OK? Thank you!

5/14/21, 1:42 AM
@Feed Your Head I wish i could claim credit for that, but its something I've heard countless times in 12 step recovery rooms. As a sober person I'm always stealing the lingo. And go ahead and private message me on my profile and i can email you too!

5/14/21, 3:29 AM
@Freckleman64 Well, it's the first I am hearing of it, so as far as I'm concerned, you are the originator. :D
sappy idiot
5/14/21, 2:15 AM
i like humiliation and twilight zone-esque curses and twists of fate, but at heart i'm a sentimental fool who needs a little romance and loves a happy ending. on a similar note, i had some struggles with internalized homophobia when i was first figuring out my sexuality, so i really like those stories where (via transformation or mc shit) someone hits rock bottom, is forced to come to grips with themselves, and walks away from the experience wiser. and with a lotta the stories on this site (understandably so, this isn't a dig) you don't usually get to enjoy all of those elements. but wow, this fucking DELIVERED!!! the sex was hot, the physical transformations were great and the mental ones had a wonderful gradual build up, and the writing was absolutely fantastic. the characters felt real with genuine depth, and i found myself seriously invested in their relationship (would it have made sense to flash forward to these two being like. happy and in love at their wedding in 4 years? no. did i still kinda want it? ...yeah). there were emotional highs and lows that really hit home in each chapter and the story as a whole had plenty of twists and turns before, ultimately, resolving itself in a very satisfying way. i'm glad i checked this site every night like a madman to keep myself updated, this brought me a lot of joy. very very excited to see what you come up with next :)

5/14/21, 2:41 AM
@sappy idiot Thank you so much for your kind words!! I've written a few stories on Literotica before this that were similar in terms of romantic melodrama, but this was my first time writing something super wacky and fetishistic (which I TOTALLY loved lol). But I am also a sentimental fool and a total sucker for a happy ending!
Hopeless Romantic
5/13/21, 10:17 AM
I doubt you will even read this, the ending was amazing but i do wish there was an epilogue of just Willem and Jake and to see them flourishing in there love. I too was wanting the vivid imagery you portray to be that of there life after Willem discovered his true love. I will always love this story but the moment in the coffee shop where Willem told Jake he'd try and wanted to try to be his everything was my favorite part

5/13/21, 12:29 PM
@Hopeless Romantic I hear you! Honestly, I've spent hours imagining what their lives would be like now that they finally get a chance to be together. I too am a hopeless romantic. The only trouble I run into as the writer is how to show that in a dramatically interesting way that continues to tell a story. I think also i was afraid of being too sentimental with the ending, considering this site doesn't have too many of those stories lol. I could certainly see plenty of drama in willem and jake dating, him introducing him to his parents, etc. If I ever did some sort of sequel series with a different curse, i would for sure bring them back as sub characters.

Maybe just make it for the fans.
5/14/21, 2:10 AM
@Freckleman64 maybe just make it for the fans. Post it elsewhere, tumblr, wattapa3d, literotica... something.... anything that gives more.
SC Walker
5/13/21, 7:43 PM
I loved this story. Throughout my writing one thing I have always struggled with is crafting that balance of real, human emotion, character development, and filthy sex. I admire you so much for doing something that I have been striving towards. I'm partially jealous, but also inspired to push myself further in my own writing. I think one key strength of your writing is your ability to show, rather than tell. An example being Willem's parents' reaction towards him - you never once say "Mom is like this towards Willem, Dad is like this.", but just through their dialogue you understand their personalities and relationships. I hope you continue writing, and I would love to chat more about the "craft" if you'd be willing. I feel like I could learn a lot from you. -SC (Also the fact that you wrote 11 chapters in 1 month is just mind-boggling to me, I don't know how you do it!)

5/13/21, 11:30 PM
@SC Walker I get jealous of other people's writing SO OFTEN and it always motivates me to push myself as well. Also my work writing (I work as a freelance writer) was pretty slow this month so this was basically all I worked on lol. I'd definitely be down to chat! Private message me on my profile and I can email you.