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5/13/21, 10:04 PM
absman420, is there a picture or specific person that inspired Dom's character?

5/14/21, 10:06 AM
@Nurseboy Not really, no. He's just everyman
Evan
5/14/21, 8:45 AM
Cool idea and fun story! sta
5/14/21, 8:09 AM
hottt, hope there is a sequel.
5/14/21, 1:32 AM
As a super-fan of "The Twilight Zone," I loved every minute of this! The descriptions of transformations are hot as always, but you also successfully captured Rod Serling's social commentary bent--in this case, the danger of what it means to be a TikTok star and how the desperate need for attention can be a curse. Plus you snagged Serling's great irony: Ethan has tons of ATTENTION, but no CONNECTION any longer. He's become a print ad himself--unreal, a glossy magazine picture that everyone loves but nobody sees. Brilliant stuff!

5/14/21, 5:40 AM
Thanks @Feed Your Head! It felt like a clumsy job compared to Serling, so I'm glad to see some of the themes came through.
5/14/21, 12:55 AM
Fantastic! I absolutely loved it, and cant wait to see more in the future!

5/14/21, 5:30 AM
Thank ye' @Jeep!
5/14/21, 12:40 AM
I'm a big fan both of most of the themes you included on this story and the Twilight Zone. You made a great job in capturing the essence of the show. I'll be waiting for the next, episode!

5/14/21, 5:30 AM
Thanks @Plymouth58! I'm glad to hear it felt like the right essence.
5/14/21, 4:38 AM
Man, forget the boy, I would bang his dad! <3
Evan
5/14/21, 4:03 AM
Thank you for this series and for finishing it. I have been very emotionally invested in these characters and I'm thrilled at the sweet, romantic ending. I also like the lack of fanfare in the ending. they are together and living their lives. What a perfect end for them after such a journey.

5/14/21, 4:28 AM
@Evan Thank you so much! I figured after all the hell they'd been through they deserved something sweet and simple.
5/2/21, 11:27 PM
I'm so torn, part me thinks that since he's used his perfect body to exploit others that his coup de grace would be to lose his good looks and muscles. Unable to ever pick up a weight again and always giving in to his crazings to stuff his face with unhealthy foods. Maybe even have him be the special guest at next years cruise and have him be a busboy while everyone treats him like dirt and ridicules how he's really let himself go . Buuuuuuttttt, it would be such a shame to waste such a perfect body. Maybe have it where his only motivation for continuing the upkeep of his physique is the attention from lesser men. He just can't walk by a balding dad bod without having that guy validate his body in some way. That could be fun too. Amazing story. Great setup. I'm very invested b/c youve done such a marvelous job setting this guy up as a huge douche who deserves everything coming to him.

5/14/21, 4:25 AM
@JHunter Love the validation idea. thanks
5/14/21, 3:49 AM
This story was amazing, and the ending certainly did not disappoint. You're an incredibly talented writer; thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.

5/14/21, 3:54 AM
@Hypnoguy67 You're so welcome! Thank you for the kind words.