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5/13/21, 10:16 PM
i love the framing device of this being like a gay episode of the twilight zone. all my fave themes are here too, obliviousness, dumbing down, and hot guys who can't keep their hands off of one another. excellently written and steamy. Another one to add to the faves!

5/13/21, 10:37 PM
Thank you @Mind Labyrinth! I wanted something I could use as an anthology series, and given my predilection for twist endings and my love for classic sci-fi, this seemed ideal. Thanks for faving!
5/13/21, 10:13 PM
[insert "Play FFXIV now with free trial up to Heavensward" joke here]
5/13/21, 10:05 PM
Holy *fuck*, dude that is incredibly hot.
5/13/21, 9:19 PM
I really love this story you're creating. The way you describe Jeses fall each time is just beyond amazing, the power dynamics you set up are epic, and I fall into extreme lust with every hypnotic character you write. Particularly enjoying Charles as a potential hypnotic rival for Dennis, can't wait to see how that competition pans out! please keep it up, its amazing work!

5/13/21, 9:26 PM
@Sboy9416 The comment is much appreciated. I am very much enjoying the story as well. Charles was a random, but great addition to the story. At least me and you can agree on that. And I definitely have ideas for their rivalry, and surely more to come.
Anonymous
5/13/21, 8:55 PM
this was such a great story and I loved reading it
5/13/21, 7:25 PM
Left me wanting more. Like meeting the uncle.
rwriter51
5/13/21, 6:48 PM
Awesome story. It would be great to see some actual sex with his buddies.
nycboot
5/13/21, 5:20 PM
Wow - I was wondering if you were ever going to get deep inside Jese's mind again (as in the early chapters). Thank you! This was wonderful! But you gotta continue - we all want to see what happens with Jese. Thank you!

5/13/21, 6:41 PM
@nycboot Thanks!! Definitely shifting into different styles, moods and focuses. I just sort of sit down, become Jese, and push myself through a story. Let ideas come, and react to them. Sometimes get deep, other times push the story fast. Sometimes I'm tranced and don't have much for thoughts. Blank, empty, ya know?
5/13/21, 6:27 PM
They certainly can. There already are many who have joined our ranks all over the world. We are taking over the rest of Egypt to make it our base of operations. Then we will spread around the rest of the unconquered worldwide.
5/13/21, 5:03 PM
Great story, hard me hard & leaking the hole time. So good I wanted to be part of the story. A lot of semen going around and one can never get enough. More episodes with more details more cops and more semen, please!