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5/13/21, 7:49 AM
Finally the end is here and it's a happy ending thank goodness! I have been so stressed about how this might end that I've actually dreamed about it twice. I'm so glad that Jake's and Willem's love won in the end, and that Willem got his ass from the curse back! I'll admit I had been hoping the ending would be a little more romantic and mushy, something that could make me cry but the lack of anything more than tearing up on my part could be because it's 3 something in the morning and I just woke up less than half an hour ago from a weird dream, and checked to see if this was posted on a whim when I checked the time, and then I had to lay here with my heart pounding in my chest in a mix of anxiety and excitement for a minute before reading because I was nervous and scared this could have a bad ending to it. I do wish we could have seen when Willem introduced Jake to his parents, but I am glad that poor Jeffery was somewhat spared from his curse, even if it seems that he still has a little bit of work to go in regards to his personality (Then again, a bit of a whininess can be cute in some people) and it would have been nice to have seen Willem and Jeffery recognize each other and spoke but that's just me I guess. I also love the fact that Willem's asshole friends look like their going to finally get their comeuppance, and it gives me hope that he may gain them back as friends at some point, because it was honestly sad that he lost his one friend who had been his best friend since childhood. I'll be honest I'm still not sure how I feel about Bussy, because they seemed petty sometimes, and selfish and uncaring sometimes as well, but they also obviously have some kindness and mercy in them seeing as how they helped Willem realize he truly loved Jake regardless of his sexuality, and they showed mercy to Jeffery and ended his curse early (Which raises the question of why they didn't help Willem skip having to sleep with his uncle, unless they didn't have the knowledge of how to at the time) But yes this was truly worth the ride, and honestly if you were to ever write an actual book or e-book and sell it, I most definitely would buy it...well, as long as it's gay that is haha.

5/13/21, 12:40 PM
@TaylorGuy I never even for a second considered anything less than a happy ending, I'm too sentimental! As for Bussy, I always saw her as someone who, apart from completely not having her shit together, was totally comfortable using tough love to teach someone what they needed to know. If she were an AA sponsor, she'd be the hardass who took no bullshit and didn't pick up the phone if you called her even five minutes late. But at the end of the day, she teaches you what you need to know and you're better off for it. And thank you so much! I'm sure something will be on the horizon eventually lol. I definitely love writing, and erotic fiction has been such a fun genre to explore.
5/13/21, 8:08 AM
What a cute and satisfying end! I agree with previous comments who said this read like a screenplay almost, the romance of the final chapter felt very cinematic, in the best way! You've warmed my heart & my dick with this series, a real treat from beginning to end

5/13/21, 12:33 PM
@silverstat thank you! Is it obvious that I'm working on writing for television in real life? lol
5/13/21, 10:37 AM
This is brilliant. You have a talent for really weaving the emotional journey of these characters and putting the tension in their lives on display. Seriously, great work, and thank you *so fucking much* for sharing it with us!

5/13/21, 12:32 PM
@Dace Thank you!!! I was so emotionally invested in this story, to be honest. I've thought about these characters every day, all day for the last month. I'm so glad you enjoyed!
5/13/21, 10:30 AM
I'll echo the screenplay comments. Reads like a movieand a good one! This was such an enjoyable series, you're a fantastic writer. Thanks so much!

5/13/21, 12:30 PM
@GiveInToTheMusk thank you so much! I've appreciated your comments every step of the way.
5/13/21, 12:22 PM
Thanks all - glad you guys are enjoying the story. Just posted #3. Still more to be told.
5/13/21, 10:56 AM
Welcome back
5/13/21, 10:36 AM
so glad you're back to writing again :) can't wait to see more from you
Anonymous
5/13/21, 10:33 AM
Great series so far!
Anonymous
5/13/21, 10:32 AM
Loved it!
Anonymous
5/13/21, 10:18 AM
very good the game also sounds like this game app that doubles as an workout program