Recent Comments

5/13/21, 9:19 PM
I really love this story you're creating. The way you describe Jeses fall each time is just beyond amazing, the power dynamics you set up are epic, and I fall into extreme lust with every hypnotic character you write. Particularly enjoying Charles as a potential hypnotic rival for Dennis, can't wait to see how that competition pans out! please keep it up, its amazing work!

5/13/21, 9:26 PM
@Sboy9416 The comment is much appreciated. I am very much enjoying the story as well. Charles was a random, but great addition to the story. At least me and you can agree on that. And I definitely have ideas for their rivalry, and surely more to come.
Anonymous
5/13/21, 8:55 PM
this was such a great story and I loved reading it
5/13/21, 7:25 PM
Left me wanting more. Like meeting the uncle.
rwriter51
5/13/21, 6:48 PM
Awesome story. It would be great to see some actual sex with his buddies.
nycboot
5/13/21, 5:20 PM
Wow - I was wondering if you were ever going to get deep inside Jese's mind again (as in the early chapters). Thank you! This was wonderful! But you gotta continue - we all want to see what happens with Jese. Thank you!

5/13/21, 6:41 PM
@nycboot Thanks!! Definitely shifting into different styles, moods and focuses. I just sort of sit down, become Jese, and push myself through a story. Let ideas come, and react to them. Sometimes get deep, other times push the story fast. Sometimes I'm tranced and don't have much for thoughts. Blank, empty, ya know?
5/13/21, 6:27 PM
They certainly can. There already are many who have joined our ranks all over the world. We are taking over the rest of Egypt to make it our base of operations. Then we will spread around the rest of the unconquered worldwide.
5/13/21, 5:03 PM
Great story, hard me hard & leaking the hole time. So good I wanted to be part of the story. A lot of semen going around and one can never get enough. More episodes with more details more cops and more semen, please!
Anonymous
5/13/21, 5:00 PM
I don't get what happens when tine goes back to normal. Can you delve into that?
Orthus
5/13/21, 4:23 PM
Excellent story, one of my faves on here now. Thanks for the fun ride!
5/13/21, 1:44 PM
Bravo! this ending was pretty damned perfect and read like the ending to a series...everyone got what they wanted and a new set of the curse leads to a possible sequel. I'm so glad Jake and Willem are happy...I would have liked to see Willem parents reaction, but I think we already know the foreshadowing seeing as how it was 2 months, his mom already suspected from a previous chapter and there was no nervousness from the conversation about meeting them. Bravo darling, well done!

5/13/21, 1:58 PM
@Brody I'm really so glad that you enjoyed it. I am almost always in favor of seeing more rather than less, but I decided not to show meeting the parents because I wanted to end their story with the idea that no matter what they have to navigate (Willem's parents' reaction, being comfortable with PDA, Willem coming out to his roommate, etc.), they would be able to handle it as long as they had each other. So I tried to insinuate a lot in the earlier scene how the parents would react (dad still hoping son ends up with a girl, mom working overtime to be accepting) while allowing our imaginations to fill in the rest of their lives.

5/13/21, 2:04 PM
@Freckleman64 the character development and the emotions felt so real, I found myself leaping with excitement or feeling the sorrow of loneliness. I find myself really succumbing to loneliness being a transwoman. too afraid to date, but so lonely because of it. this story was the perfect escape to feel everything I feel on a daily basis.