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5/11/21, 1:25 PM
AbsMan you gave me tons of hot entertainment with your stories over the years so I was happy to pinch in for this as my way of giving some support. More hot stories from you would be a great thing. Hope the e-book does great! I'm currently a bit after AppleJack's conversion and I already came twice lmao

5/11/21, 1:44 PM
@Inversion Thank you so much for the support! I'm kind of hoping more people feel that way. I've been writing stories for almost thirty years for free and this is the first time I've attempted something like self-publishing -- I think it's a small price to pay. More, it's artists supporting artists, which is a fine thing. I will always write short stories and fill this site with them, but I'm glad to have had the opportunity to try a novel. I'm very proud of it. I'm glad you're cumming back for more. What did you think of AppleJack's methodology?

5/11/21, 2:31 PM
@absman420 get your coin man :) If people want it they'll buy it, if they don't plenty of free content to enjoy as well. I wouldn't want to spoil too much for other readers but it was an interesting take. Maybe these centaur gods aren't so divine if a chubby computer nerd can trick them. Then again in Greek mythology the Gods are not omnipotent flawless beings like in Abrahamic religions so maybe that was the point. It does seem like their relationship has shifted a lot by the event though, haven't read further yet will be interesting to see what happens. I'm kind of a sucker for happy endings so I do hope everyone will get along and have lots of immortal gay muscle sex in the end. lol.

5/11/21, 3:09 PM
@Inversion of all the members of the herd, AppleJack has the most developed character arc. He finds himself, never you fear. And he helps Red figure out who HE is, too!

5/11/21, 4:06 PM
@Inversion One of my favorite things about the book is the interactions and dynamics between the centaurs. They all play off of each other well, and the relationships between them feel very organic. And one or two connections that absman did not foresee cropped up as a result of those interactions!

5/11/21, 9:22 PM
@ParadoxBear It's true! Both of the relationships that develop within the herd were surprises to me! That's what happens when you start working with actual characters instead of an outline -- they tell you what they want to do.
5/11/21, 6:19 PM
Man, this series is so hot
akki
5/11/21, 4:22 PM
Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please upload the next part.
5/11/21, 3:18 PM
This was a fascinating story with a great premise! I think, for future works, it might help to follow the rule of "show, don't tell." Much of the story was about the presenter describing what would happen. It might be more fun to actually see it happening--perhaps the presentation includes a video of a man undergoing the transformation, with some of the Board of Directors realizing the same thing is happening to them. Good stuff! :)
5/6/21, 2:48 PM
Thank you for following. Very soon all of Egypt will once again be under the Pharaoh's command!

5/11/21, 2:30 PM
@Slave Darius, Other males of other country can join ?
5/11/21, 2:07 PM
Whoops! Apparently didn't paste the whole story from the original doc. Added that in and submitted the edit.
5/11/21, 1:58 PM
Did the story changes at the half-point when you were writing? This feel like a different story from chapter one.
5/11/21, 12:35 PM
Where can I book this tour? Wish there were real tours like this for single guys!
Anonymous
5/11/21, 12:05 PM
You’ve got a great idea here, but it feels like things cut off too soon. I would’ve loved us to get more detail about what’s actually happening to the men in the room once their own Phase 1 has begun, rather than rushing through it to get to the conclusion
5/11/21, 11:51 AM
luv the great start to the story.....would like to c where this goes.....since this is the first of your stories i'm actually commenting on i really would like to c where this story goes.....all the other stories u written so far don't seem as interesting or hold my attention for long.....but this one i couldn't stop rereading.....i really would like for u to continue this story if u can.....please try to do it soon. thx for a great start