Recent Comments

5/11/21, 6:19 PM
Man, this series is so hot
akki
5/11/21, 4:22 PM
Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please upload the next part.
5/11/21, 3:18 PM
This was a fascinating story with a great premise! I think, for future works, it might help to follow the rule of "show, don't tell." Much of the story was about the presenter describing what would happen. It might be more fun to actually see it happening--perhaps the presentation includes a video of a man undergoing the transformation, with some of the Board of Directors realizing the same thing is happening to them. Good stuff! :)
5/6/21, 2:48 PM
Thank you for following. Very soon all of Egypt will once again be under the Pharaoh's command!

5/11/21, 2:30 PM
@Slave Darius, Other males of other country can join ?
5/11/21, 2:07 PM
Whoops! Apparently didn't paste the whole story from the original doc. Added that in and submitted the edit.
5/11/21, 1:58 PM
Did the story changes at the half-point when you were writing? This feel like a different story from chapter one.
5/11/21, 12:35 PM
Where can I book this tour? Wish there were real tours like this for single guys!
Anonymous
5/11/21, 12:05 PM
You’ve got a great idea here, but it feels like things cut off too soon. I would’ve loved us to get more detail about what’s actually happening to the men in the room once their own Phase 1 has begun, rather than rushing through it to get to the conclusion
5/11/21, 11:51 AM
luv the great start to the story.....would like to c where this goes.....since this is the first of your stories i'm actually commenting on i really would like to c where this story goes.....all the other stories u written so far don't seem as interesting or hold my attention for long.....but this one i couldn't stop rereading.....i really would like for u to continue this story if u can.....please try to do it soon. thx for a great start
5/11/21, 5:55 AM
Looks like the new colony has a good start and Ed's new sexuality is taking shape. Looking forward to seeing how Ed handles being a gay alpha daddy. 😁

5/11/21, 11:44 AM
Thank you. I really appreciate all the positive responses, and am glad your enjoying the story 😊@Uncle Arctos