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5/12/21, 11:13 AM
Love this, cant wait to read more. I wish I was chris.
5/12/21, 11:10 AM
wow thats hot, cant wait for the next chapter.
It's been 3 years
5/12/21, 10:12 AM
ok so its been 3 years and theres been no update whatsoever. the story is so great but give us the rest please!
5/11/21, 9:27 PM
Though I've mentioned it in the Forum, I haven't yet here -- @paradoxbear served as my editor/ creative consultant during the development and writing of PHOLUS REBORN. I'm absolutely beholden to him, not just his matchless knowledge of mythology, but his unbridled imagination. My manuscript is literally littered with his commentary. Without his valued input, PHOLUS REBORN would not be the novel it is -- I'm very grateful. And we've already talked about a series of three books!

5/12/21, 6:37 AM
What started out as doing a favor for a friend has ballooned into a three-book deal! As with many things absman420-related, it just keeps growing and growing!

5/12/21, 10:06 AM
@ParadoxBear once I figure out a way to pay you...
5/12/21, 3:47 AM
thanks Absman for telling stories over the years that have entertained and been that not so guilty pleasure. it was thus a natch to grab this on e-book.kindle. happy to support for all the words you've given us for free. Relz g.

5/12/21, 10:04 AM
@Relzad Thank you for the support! Please let me know what you think!
Nutiper
5/12/21, 1:54 AM
The blowjob scene from Chapter 5 is probably the ***best*** blowjob scene I've read on this entire site — so I'm pumped to see how you've set up *this* second (upcoming) blowjob scene in a way that's pretty different from the first one, but also *very* fun. (Assuming Charley gets that far, of course, and doesn't blank out from pleasure again!) I think it's smart to shift the focus for variety... going from a near-biological urge to deepthroat (in Chap. 5) to an obsessive "curiosity" to know how much cum Zethro's balls can produce, and implicitly a need for that cum. (Especially since the cum is suggested to be possibly addictive or obsession-forming, with how it tingles wherever it touches Charley's body — which also makes me wonder if that's a thing that the alien bros are tweaking, and if they can control his reactions to it...) All in all, this sets up a pretty different type of blowjob scene (since Charley's goal isn't the same; and the way he'll handle Zethro's junk will be different), but it's a scene that promises to be just as hot. I'm excited to see how it plays out, if it ends up happening! Also, I know that we chatted about story ideas, but I *love* what you did with this chapter and how you fleshed everything out. There's something really nice in how the "manipulations" of Charley are escalating in their non-subtlety, and how the situations he's in are getting increasingly blatant. It also makes me revisit past chapters, and realize that any time Charley said he was 'curious' about something, he was *definitely* being manipulated — and that changes how I read past events, which is a neat effect to pull off. I've gotten very curious about the backstory, and I'm looking forward to learning more in the next couple of chapters!
KA Kameron
9/12/19, 12:52 AM
funnily enough- i have a story with a REALLY REALLY similar plot line i posted here some time ago featuring Priapus... can we multiverse? p.s ive loved your work on here since very early days! so glad to see you posting again

Satyr Hedonist
5/12/21, 1:40 AM
@KA Kameron @absman420 wow i wasn't planning on reading this because of a story i need to document, but i think it's a sign we all have simliar natures and i needed to learn. i would love to discuss with you both sometime
5/11/21, 11:34 PM
hot as hell, loved the dependence. When you mentioned the chair administered based in weight, was the idea the chair could weigh them or was the weight just gotten from like health records?
5/11/21, 10:46 PM
this is a nice reprieve from the other stories with a focus more on the protagonists personal growth over time. This story things me of another story "Chip Off the Old Block" on mcstories. i truly hope this has a happy ending, but i guess i can settle for something bittersweet.
5/11/21, 1:25 PM
AbsMan you gave me tons of hot entertainment with your stories over the years so I was happy to pinch in for this as my way of giving some support. More hot stories from you would be a great thing. Hope the e-book does great! I'm currently a bit after AppleJack's conversion and I already came twice lmao

5/11/21, 1:44 PM
@Inversion Thank you so much for the support! I'm kind of hoping more people feel that way. I've been writing stories for almost thirty years for free and this is the first time I've attempted something like self-publishing -- I think it's a small price to pay. More, it's artists supporting artists, which is a fine thing. I will always write short stories and fill this site with them, but I'm glad to have had the opportunity to try a novel. I'm very proud of it. I'm glad you're cumming back for more. What did you think of AppleJack's methodology?

5/11/21, 2:31 PM
@absman420 get your coin man :) If people want it they'll buy it, if they don't plenty of free content to enjoy as well. I wouldn't want to spoil too much for other readers but it was an interesting take. Maybe these centaur gods aren't so divine if a chubby computer nerd can trick them. Then again in Greek mythology the Gods are not omnipotent flawless beings like in Abrahamic religions so maybe that was the point. It does seem like their relationship has shifted a lot by the event though, haven't read further yet will be interesting to see what happens. I'm kind of a sucker for happy endings so I do hope everyone will get along and have lots of immortal gay muscle sex in the end. lol.

5/11/21, 3:09 PM
@Inversion of all the members of the herd, AppleJack has the most developed character arc. He finds himself, never you fear. And he helps Red figure out who HE is, too!

5/11/21, 4:06 PM
@Inversion One of my favorite things about the book is the interactions and dynamics between the centaurs. They all play off of each other well, and the relationships between them feel very organic. And one or two connections that absman did not foresee cropped up as a result of those interactions!

5/11/21, 9:22 PM
@ParadoxBear It's true! Both of the relationships that develop within the herd were surprises to me! That's what happens when you start working with actual characters instead of an outline -- they tell you what they want to do.