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5/10/21, 7:34 PM
Hey guys, I know a lot of you have been waiting for Eddie and Billy to get hot and heavy, this chapter is setting the stage, next chapter will finally break into that taboo 😁
5/10/21, 7:19 PM
fuck. this is fucking good. i love you and your stories!
5/10/21, 4:42 PM
Welcome back! i always love reading your shorts on Tumblr but it will be nice to read a multi-chapter story again. This one is off to a great start
5/9/21, 5:36 AM
This ended up so sweet! Great tempo from set-up to conclusion! The sex was wild and the love tender. I would love to see a bunch of vignettes of the couple traveling the world at different eras.

5/10/21, 3:46 PM
@CyberSatyr Thank you so much. I put a lot of effort into getting the pacing just right (and of course making the sex hot) so it's always great to have that acknowledged. I didn't actually have the ending planned out before I started writing, so I was kind of surprised myself. Afterwards, I *was* actually thinking that if I came up with more ideas, these two would be fun to have adventures with, kind of like a snake-y version of The Old Guard.
5/10/21, 3:28 PM
Wow, this is a very hot story!
5/10/21, 2:27 PM
I love the foreshadowing you did with Tomas, the stepdad's, Nestor's, grandfather. I honestly can't help but want to see what his stepson does to him now that Nestor's helpless against him. I love all your stories, but I always wanted to see how you would write a story where the viewpoint is from the controller, rather than the controlled. I also want to see how the story might be different, if the person in control is someone who cares about the one being controlled, rather than just using him casually, or in name only, and than throwing him away. All in all, is such an exciting start! Can't wait to see what comes next!
5/10/21, 1:45 PM
I don't know how the device works, but since it was over the phone, it was unclear to all. I was almost hoping that Jordan was listening in to see what was happening to his stepdad thinking he was safe, only to find that as soon as the phone hung up he caught himself saying, "My name is Nestslut and I’m nothing but a dumb fucking slut that can’t learn for shit."
5/10/21, 1:27 PM
I rarely comment, but this is one heck of a new story. On one hand I wish I hadn't read it yet because the suspense is killing me and I wish I could just binge read this once the whole story is over, but on the other hand the setup is just sooooo good I'm already imagining so many scenarios that can play out!
5/10/21, 1:04 PM
Welcome back! Can't wait to see where this goes.
5/10/21, 10:42 AM
So the mind control here is extremely hot. I'm not really digging the characterization of Jordan. I get that he's attracted to his stepdad, but I feel like he should be a little more scared and concerned for the man when he sees him under Ace's complete hypnotic control. Right now, I'm feeling like if Jordan got mind controlled by Ace as well, it would serve him right.