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5/10/21, 10:14 AM
I'm so glad you're back !! missed you so much This new story is off to a very hot start. Your writing just hits all the right spots of mind control for me. Didn't know about your Tumblr. I'll go ahead and follow that straight away. Thanks for writing :) edit: noticed this is just a one off :(
5/10/21, 9:29 AM
once again awesome! thank you!
5/10/21, 8:32 AM
i love coming back to this story!
May 5, 2021
Blackjinx123
5/10/21, 6:07 AM
Short, sweet, and hot as hell! Great first addition to this site! I especially liked the protagonists change from shy to dominating. That, and the way he took charge, but lost himself to pleasure and power towards the end. Congrats, jack, i cant wait to read more of your work! :)
5/9/21, 2:28 AM
Oh my God I'm screaming with happiness! You don't know how fast I ran to bed just to finally read this. I'm so glad you're back! And with two chapters at once, talk about a way to win over a boy's heart! Thank you so much! I loved this chapter. I really, really like the way those guys are sexualizing Jese from the start and making this all seem normal to him in every game he plays. Also, as I've told you before, one of the biggest turn ons for me with this story is the "sluttyfication" of Jese, how they are slowly but surely turning "slut" and "whore" into an identity for him, making him crave, desire and love cock and getting fucked. And seeing it happening both in a game perspective and in real life is incredibly fun. I love it. Also, I really enjoyed the greater focus you're giving to Jese's ass as the story progresses! I loved the setting for this one because I love college scenarios. And the way how everything was sexualized from the start with Jese getting into sexual situations is so good. I can't wait to see what happens next. Being a huge D&D and fantasy fan, I gotta say tho, I can't wait to see Jese getting back in Star World into Dennis clutches, and to see what Dennis has in store for him there. I hope he turns Jese more and more into a slut inside the game with this fact being reflected in Jese's gaming outfits (super slutty and skimpy outfits where Jese's ass is bared would be the greatest turn on for me), with more butt near face moments, rimming, humping and griding, Dennis playing it with him and just Jese generally getting fucked a lot in the game by everyone. Thank you so much for coming back and I hope you're okay! Can't wait for more!

5/10/21, 4:16 AM
@Elmara Glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for the comment. Yeah, I'm having fun with Jese's path in this story. I think I've approached as the main character being a lot more open to the transition, than in previous stories. Learning about loving cock, and becoming a better slut. Being corrupted by the pleasure of sex, overwritting his desire to resist. Definitely going to returrn to Star World soon. Just need to figure out how I want to continue things in that realm. I mean, I can pretty much do anything with it, but foremost I need to explore the continuation of the serpent arc. I can definitely investigate some slutty outfits for Jese. Right now is like, respectable slutty? Loincloth with red bottoms underneath. But maybe I go Zangief Streetfighter for his next outfit? Maybe a trip back to the blacksmith for some better gear. "Hey, need some water gear for a tough octopus battle." "Got just the thing, speedo and bracers. Skin to water or something like that bonus. Believe."
5/10/21, 3:52 AM
Very nice man! Hope they face some knob polishing torment for their forcibly hard cocks! haha Love the immobilization.
nycboot
5/10/21, 3:34 AM
I just realized that I never commented on this story but, next to rubbrsome's stories, it is the one I think of most often. It is masterful.
5/10/21, 2:50 AM
My heart x_X I'm glad that Willem got his old dick size back, even if the cost was his bubble butt haha, but just...god I need the next chapter asap, I need the resolution to this. Also, hopefully you'll let us know what happens to poor Jeffery, because I feel like he'd have a lot more trouble with having to bottom 1,000 times, and what that could do to his brain.
5/10/21, 2:01 AM
Another great chapter! Like the groundwork you are laying!! Looking forward to whats cumming next!
5/8/21, 6:18 PM
I've just found your series the other day, and it's been an absolute pleasure to read. this series has to be the best I've read here at least in the last year!

5/10/21, 1:58 AM
@whatisthis Thanks!! <3