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5/9/21, 2:28 AM
Oh my God I'm screaming with happiness! You don't know how fast I ran to bed just to finally read this. I'm so glad you're back! And with two chapters at once, talk about a way to win over a boy's heart! Thank you so much! I loved this chapter. I really, really like the way those guys are sexualizing Jese from the start and making this all seem normal to him in every game he plays. Also, as I've told you before, one of the biggest turn ons for me with this story is the "sluttyfication" of Jese, how they are slowly but surely turning "slut" and "whore" into an identity for him, making him crave, desire and love cock and getting fucked. And seeing it happening both in a game perspective and in real life is incredibly fun. I love it. Also, I really enjoyed the greater focus you're giving to Jese's ass as the story progresses! I loved the setting for this one because I love college scenarios. And the way how everything was sexualized from the start with Jese getting into sexual situations is so good. I can't wait to see what happens next. Being a huge D&D and fantasy fan, I gotta say tho, I can't wait to see Jese getting back in Star World into Dennis clutches, and to see what Dennis has in store for him there. I hope he turns Jese more and more into a slut inside the game with this fact being reflected in Jese's gaming outfits (super slutty and skimpy outfits where Jese's ass is bared would be the greatest turn on for me), with more butt near face moments, rimming, humping and griding, Dennis playing it with him and just Jese generally getting fucked a lot in the game by everyone. Thank you so much for coming back and I hope you're okay! Can't wait for more!

5/10/21, 4:16 AM
@Elmara Glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for the comment. Yeah, I'm having fun with Jese's path in this story. I think I've approached as the main character being a lot more open to the transition, than in previous stories. Learning about loving cock, and becoming a better slut. Being corrupted by the pleasure of sex, overwritting his desire to resist. Definitely going to returrn to Star World soon. Just need to figure out how I want to continue things in that realm. I mean, I can pretty much do anything with it, but foremost I need to explore the continuation of the serpent arc. I can definitely investigate some slutty outfits for Jese. Right now is like, respectable slutty? Loincloth with red bottoms underneath. But maybe I go Zangief Streetfighter for his next outfit? Maybe a trip back to the blacksmith for some better gear. "Hey, need some water gear for a tough octopus battle." "Got just the thing, speedo and bracers. Skin to water or something like that bonus. Believe."
5/10/21, 3:52 AM
Very nice man! Hope they face some knob polishing torment for their forcibly hard cocks! haha Love the immobilization.
nycboot
5/10/21, 3:34 AM
I just realized that I never commented on this story but, next to rubbrsome's stories, it is the one I think of most often. It is masterful.
5/10/21, 2:50 AM
My heart x_X I'm glad that Willem got his old dick size back, even if the cost was his bubble butt haha, but just...god I need the next chapter asap, I need the resolution to this. Also, hopefully you'll let us know what happens to poor Jeffery, because I feel like he'd have a lot more trouble with having to bottom 1,000 times, and what that could do to his brain.
5/10/21, 2:01 AM
Another great chapter! Like the groundwork you are laying!! Looking forward to whats cumming next!
5/8/21, 6:18 PM
I've just found your series the other day, and it's been an absolute pleasure to read. this series has to be the best I've read here at least in the last year!

5/10/21, 1:58 AM
@whatisthis Thanks!! <3
5/9/21, 11:47 PM
Goodness, the Karens in the comment section over politics. Go over to Bdsmlr and you'll be caterwauling and protesting all over their blogs themed with red versus blue gay porn. Seriously, this chapter had nothing to do with political brainwashing, so what's the deal?! I know, because I'm into that kind of smut and I've read most of the "political" tagged stories on this website (I'm horny for hypnothrill and Ethan White) I enjoyed this chapter. I'm on a wave of locked up horniness and have no idea when it can be relieved. When I'm truly desperate, i don't mind being called gay pejoratives or given female pronouns; so this chapter really got me in a submissive headspace needing to be used like Willem, by someone I vehemently disagree with their political ideology.
4/16/21, 9:10 AM
Oh, I like the ending of this chapter. I'm curious as to how Will is going to react when he realizes that he's no longer completely straight, assuming he has any attraction to girls left after all of this. I've been reading some of the comments on other chapters, and I'm going to be the contrarian here, I hope that Will gets his original body and dick back when the curse breaks (which I hope it does break), maybe a bit improved with it being more toned, him keeping the bubble butt, and him having like, a shorter refractory period. Or even better, he ends up becoming more muscular then he was before and with a bigger dick, but he still vastly prefers bottoming, but would top occasionally. I personally feel like there's way to many stories where guys end up reduced to extremely slim, stupid to borderline brain dead, slutty bottom twinks. But that's just my personal feelings, and I'm sure that whatever direction you take this story in will be good.

5/9/21, 10:52 PM
@TaylorGuy Your comment about not being totally straight by the end reminds me of the story on the mind control website. https://mcstories.com/ChipOffTheOldBlock/index.html I enjoy stories where there happens to be a significant change of heart in the central figure in a story, especially one for the better of their humanity.
Martin
5/9/21, 8:59 PM
Ok, if I'm ever fine with vore, then with a story like this. Thank you!

5/9/21, 9:10 PM
@Martin thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Zac
5/9/21, 1:18 PM
Mmmmm ... hot story, bro! Love that Ashton's "condition" was contagious.

5/9/21, 6:51 PM
@Zac I was a bit iffy on it at first. I am glad I went that way.

Zac
5/9/21, 8:52 PM
@Drake Nightstorm definitely opens up the potential for the transformation(s) to keep getting passed on...