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LeadPb
5/7/21, 9:53 PM
Why do I feel like this chapter was written by someone else? Hmm...

5/8/21, 9:17 AM
@LeadPb Can you elaborate? I'm curious what you mean.
5/8/21, 1:07 AM
Would love to see a feeding tube attached :) they need to be fed during shipment right sucking tube would do fine hehe ? really enjoyed to story so far :)

5/8/21, 7:57 AM
@Jamiemboy Thanks! Glad you're enjoying the story. Spoiler alert: the cocks strapped in their mouths have a central tube, too. And yes, they're going to have to work the cocks to get water/liquid food.
5/7/21, 3:06 PM
Nice! I enjoyed the retro feel, you really captured that. It was also really romantic. Thanks!

5/8/21, 3:11 AM
@Uncle Arctos Thanks! Trying to adopt a style like that can be challenging so I'm very happy you think it worked.
5/7/21, 10:59 PM
Really enjoyed this - vivid storytelling with a fantastic balance between eroticism and romance. Well done.

5/8/21, 3:11 AM
@HunkLover Thanks! appreciate it.
11/3/20, 3:07 PM
Great ending to an awesome story!

5/8/21, 2:41 AM
@Cutlerfan Thank you so much! Now that I can reply directly I wanted to!
Zai
5/7/21, 10:23 PM
Your ideas are exciting and I look forward to reading your new stuff (as well as reread your 'classics', too!). Is Star World going to be a future-centric AU or more a present day AU? And the Gentlemen's Club concept seems very enticing. Because hey... what could possibly go wrong or be racy or nasty there, huh, LOL? It is after all for Gentle-men! Two quick questions/requests, please. If you've noticed, I am certainly a clothing fetishist. I love hot men wearing assorted attire before and during sexy sex times, LOL! Especially Speedos, suits, jockstraps, leather pants, (motorcycle) cop/military uniforms, etc. If you could include any of these in future stories, Thank You. The tighter the fit, the better, *dirty wink*. Also, isn't there an Island series chapter when Jesse is in a Speedo and gets taken back to another hypnotists room for Speedo on Speedo sex action? If I recall, it might have been Kevin's room? And they sat on the sofa for their most recent suck and fuck session. Both still in Speedos as Jesse's conqueror plows his ass. Do you know the chapter I'm referring to? I hope my long reply didn't put you to SLEEP, dude. Thanks for writing and sharing your vivid and steamy works! You Rock!

5/8/21, 1:42 AM
@Zai You're very welcome. Unfortunately I don't remember too many specifics from my Island stories, haha. If I were to jump back into it, it would nearly feel like a new experience. You'll just have to read it, and fall again ;) Star World is a near future-esk setting. So, nothing crazy different from us, but far enough that we have tech powerful enough for the Mindgear System to fit in. Also, there is only one kind of reque$t I take <3. Otherwise I tend to write what comes naturally, and what turns me on.
5/8/21, 12:59 AM
Well thank gawd it was Frank and not Francine. :-) Thanks for another great chapter. Unique and hot. Question on your writing style: Why do you choose to use the way a play is written for dialogue, i.e. Billy: “And ya can have it as much as ya want. My cock is always at yer service" versus, And Billy lustfully replies, “And ya can have it as much as ya want. My cock is always at yer service.” I don't know if it's proper writing technique but your way makes the conversation flow better. When I write I find one of the hardest things to add variety and keep interest is doing a dialog but without constantly saying "Billy replies" or Billy says." I'd be interested to know your thoughts on this esp as you chose to write it that way.

5/8/21, 1:42 AM
When I began I just had the dialog in the main body, and someone said it was hard to decipher who was saying what, so when I saw how a few other stories separated the person specifically speaking out it was easy to follow. and I just use capitals and various punctuations for inflection of their words. occassionally I do clarify how the statement is meant to be read, especially if its sarcastic. @PupScout
Nimbus
5/8/21, 12:05 AM
i just found this. Is that you? come through to me.
5/7/21, 11:32 PM
Major kudos to the beta readers that helped edit and polish this into its final form!
5/7/21, 6:40 PM
Great story love the male pattern baldness aspect Would love to see how that effects them explored more!