Recent Comments

Scott
5/6/21, 2:41 PM
loving the story hope to read mire real soon. keep the seed spreading !
5/6/21, 6:29 AM
This story just keeps getting better! Can't wait for more!

5/6/21, 10:18 AM
Thank you, I have the next chapter under way. I truly appreciate the encouragement and feedback 😊@Uncle Arctos

5/6/21, 1:58 PM
@ArdanWolfe Woot! I'll be checking back regularly!

5/6/21, 2:07 PM
Hoping in the next day or so, depending on my time and drive, I may have it done sooner 😁@Uncle Arctos
5/6/21, 4:48 AM
Another great chapter! Really enjoyed it, especially the speculation on if having sex and Billy sharing his seed with Frank BEFORE gestation will change him into an alpha or not. It would be interesting if that were the case, making reproduction more flexible so that your lone alien doesn't have to make ALL the alphas. Nicely done! So looking forward to the next chapter!

5/6/21, 10:16 AM
Thank you, Frank will definitely be a special case 😉. I really appreciate the feedback, especially as a fan of your work @Papa Werebear

5/6/21, 1:52 PM
@ArdanWolfe the feeling is mutual! I'm loving your stories, not just his one! :)

5/6/21, 2:05 PM
Awe, thank you. I am a very scatterbrained writer that just writes what comes into my head, but it makes me happy that others get enjoyment from it 😊 @Papa Werebear
BearBoi
10/1/20, 4:07 AM
"orc" really should be one of the tags. but damn lovely story. if only the orcs would return.

5/6/21, 2:02 PM
@BearBoi Husky, tusky, sexy, big furry breeding machines!
9/30/20, 12:53 PM
Hot stuff! I'd love to see the Epilogue spun off into its own separate story.

5/6/21, 2:00 PM
@Hypnothrill That's in my head, just not in written form yet. You know how that goes! Ideas form but no time to write them down.
5/6/21, 1:59 PM
I have plans for a part 2 for this one.
Aug 7, 2018
5/6/21, 1:46 PM
Damn, you got me hard and leaking through the hole story! Great descriptive writing, felt like I was there in the bar! Where can I get one of those cigars! More chapters, please.
5/6/21, 10:21 AM
The musk mind control is very hot. Amazing story, will definitely come back to this one.
5/6/21, 10:02 AM
Truly a nice change of pace to have a romantically centred story. I love this one! Can't wait to read the finale.
5/6/21, 9:05 AM
I know plot and realism aren't the first things one generally looks for in these stories, but even smut has to have a whif of plausability. The writing is fine, the descriptions are good but I can never get past the fact that the whole thing makes absolutely no damn sense. Best friends planning (well, they tied him up in a hotel room, that seems to be about the extent of the planning mentioned oh so many times) and executing a brutal beating and rape of a person they still claim, as they assault him, is a close dear friend - and all for absolutely no apparant reason what so ever. Setting aside that the entire night long event occurs completely unnoticed during a high school sports trip including at least a dozen teammates also coaches etc., it is absolutely unbelievable that after an entire night of violent physical, and chemical, abuse there is not only no evidence, abrasions, brusing, bleading asshole... but the victim of this 7 to 10 hour torture session has absolutely no memory of it the next day. I've never bothered to comment on any erotic story before - but reading this story just made my brain hurt and I needed to get it out.