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9/30/20, 12:53 PM
Hot stuff! I'd love to see the Epilogue spun off into its own separate story.

5/6/21, 2:00 PM
@Hypnothrill That's in my head, just not in written form yet. You know how that goes! Ideas form but no time to write them down.
5/6/21, 1:59 PM
I have plans for a part 2 for this one.
Aug 7, 2018
5/6/21, 1:46 PM
Damn, you got me hard and leaking through the hole story! Great descriptive writing, felt like I was there in the bar! Where can I get one of those cigars! More chapters, please.
5/6/21, 10:21 AM
The musk mind control is very hot. Amazing story, will definitely come back to this one.
5/6/21, 10:02 AM
Truly a nice change of pace to have a romantically centred story. I love this one! Can't wait to read the finale.
5/6/21, 9:05 AM
I know plot and realism aren't the first things one generally looks for in these stories, but even smut has to have a whif of plausability. The writing is fine, the descriptions are good but I can never get past the fact that the whole thing makes absolutely no damn sense. Best friends planning (well, they tied him up in a hotel room, that seems to be about the extent of the planning mentioned oh so many times) and executing a brutal beating and rape of a person they still claim, as they assault him, is a close dear friend - and all for absolutely no apparant reason what so ever. Setting aside that the entire night long event occurs completely unnoticed during a high school sports trip including at least a dozen teammates also coaches etc., it is absolutely unbelievable that after an entire night of violent physical, and chemical, abuse there is not only no evidence, abrasions, brusing, bleading asshole... but the victim of this 7 to 10 hour torture session has absolutely no memory of it the next day. I've never bothered to comment on any erotic story before - but reading this story just made my brain hurt and I needed to get it out.
5/6/21, 8:04 AM
I hope Daniel and the Fire chief end up a couple with Daniel's 2 deputies as their boys. Wonderful erotic story!
5/6/21, 7:57 AM
Really hot story! I also hope the 'condom' guy becomes an enormous powerlifter and can fill the guy who filled him.
Evan
5/6/21, 6:50 AM
I love this series but it hits me hard in the feels. Poor Jake. Heartbreaking. Cautiously optimistic for the last chapter.

5/6/21, 7:19 AM
@Evan
Cen
5/6/21, 7:07 AM
Daamnn, so invested in this story. If this was like a book trilogy, I'd read the shit out of it.

5/6/21, 7:18 AM
@Cen some of these stories would make a great tv series or movie...this story reminds me a lot of queer as folk with a curse instead of chance.