Recent Comments

5/6/21, 9:05 AM
I know plot and realism aren't the first things one generally looks for in these stories, but even smut has to have a whif of plausability. The writing is fine, the descriptions are good but I can never get past the fact that the whole thing makes absolutely no damn sense. Best friends planning (well, they tied him up in a hotel room, that seems to be about the extent of the planning mentioned oh so many times) and executing a brutal beating and rape of a person they still claim, as they assault him, is a close dear friend - and all for absolutely no apparant reason what so ever. Setting aside that the entire night long event occurs completely unnoticed during a high school sports trip including at least a dozen teammates also coaches etc., it is absolutely unbelievable that after an entire night of violent physical, and chemical, abuse there is not only no evidence, abrasions, brusing, bleading asshole... but the victim of this 7 to 10 hour torture session has absolutely no memory of it the next day. I've never bothered to comment on any erotic story before - but reading this story just made my brain hurt and I needed to get it out.
5/6/21, 8:04 AM
I hope Daniel and the Fire chief end up a couple with Daniel's 2 deputies as their boys. Wonderful erotic story!
5/6/21, 7:57 AM
Really hot story! I also hope the 'condom' guy becomes an enormous powerlifter and can fill the guy who filled him.
Evan
5/6/21, 6:50 AM
I love this series but it hits me hard in the feels. Poor Jake. Heartbreaking. Cautiously optimistic for the last chapter.

5/6/21, 7:19 AM
@Evan
Cen
5/6/21, 7:07 AM
Daamnn, so invested in this story. If this was like a book trilogy, I'd read the shit out of it.

5/6/21, 7:18 AM
@Cen some of these stories would make a great tv series or movie...this story reminds me a lot of queer as folk with a curse instead of chance.
Hopelessgay
5/6/21, 7:05 AM
Jesus, can't believe I'm reading this for the romance. Very well paced
5/6/21, 5:52 AM
Mutabear, you ALWAYS have such hot stories! I kinda wanna see the guy who becomes a condom become a big, furry, big dicked, big balled, powerlifter, since you set that up as a possibility. Maybe becoming one of the guys who fills the 'condoms'. Thanks for writing this, I enjoyed it! <3
5/6/21, 5:45 AM
so good!!
5/6/21, 3:40 AM
As you can tell by my name, I am always up for a good smell story!
5/6/21, 2:35 AM
Really great story for someone turning into a dildo. I rather enjoied it.