Recent Comments

5/7/21, 1:25 AM
A woman? And a prostitute??!! Oh how that is a turn off, so I'll just read one more sentence. Okay, well, just a few more sentences. Hmmm, it will be interesting to see how this works out. But a woman, I can't read on. But I wonder what the alien is going to do about this joining. Oh, nothing. I guess the alien is not on my side either. The computer is useless too. LOL...that was my thought process reading this. But it was so interesting I had to go on. As stated above, I love how this isn't your normal alien take over story. And with Frank entering the picture, Woof!

5/7/21, 1:43 AM
Haha well I'll admit the female to male transformation was inspired by a story I read, the way the genital transformation occurred was hot so I wanted pay homage in a way. Also the alien is looking to better the planet. Prostitution is Jessie's trauma, Alcoholism is Billy's, and Billy's father has cancer which in my chapter 5 will be developed more. But glad you made it through and enjoyed 😊@PupScout
5/7/21, 1:21 AM
Ooh, I *like*. Not sure why it took so long for me to read this, but I'm sure as hell glad I got to it at last!
May 5, 2021
5/7/21, 12:51 AM
Great first story. Congratulations.
5/7/21, 12:48 AM
LOVE this story! I look forward to how you conclude it and hope for the best for Jake and Willem.
Max
5/7/21, 12:14 AM
I love stories that have some love between the protagonists; especially with the whole arc of Willem's self growth. I personally love happy endings, but please continue the great work with the finale.
Apr 11, 2019
5/6/21, 11:29 PM
This is good fun, but it would be better told from the perspective of the cop (it's more engaging to experience the changes, and the mental confusion that comes with it), and to be shown the farm (the cop being introduced to it) than to be told about it. but it is a super-hot story.
5/6/21, 9:45 PM
Hi Clown Boi I am not sure if you are still checking comments here and I was going to email you. but your email is not listed. This story is amazing and I am begging you to continue it. Maybe you will get me motivated to finish some of mine. Please feel free to contact me at scot6789@yahoo.com.
5/6/21, 9:04 PM
I like returning to this one often
Anonymous
5/6/21, 7:28 PM
This will always be one of my favorite stories on this site. It's one if the first erotic transformation stories I'd ever read, and gets me hard every time. Huge fan of faggy sissy bois with big hair, and have always wanted to become a little Bengi-type myself!
5/6/21, 6:52 PM
Hot, heart-wrenching... amazing. Amazing work. Bring it all home next chapter! (Also: I expect some resolution to the B-plot of Willem's new wardrobe that's designed for a giant bubble butt. Don't think we've forgotten *that* bit of storyline :P )

5/6/21, 6:58 PM
@Noam de Pluma personally, I think Jake has the final say in the curse...fingers crossed, after all its because of him Willem got cursed to begin with