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5/5/21, 10:15 AM
i will say i love this story but i somehow hope Brody will get a lover eventually (maybe that's just me) bit like a lover that can turn the slutty jock show a dominant guy can also show true love
5/5/21, 12:31 AM
First, a personal story. I have a mechanic hot boy that visits me occasionally. When he's not blowing his load down my throat or in my hole, he blows it on his belly. I then have a feast as I lick it up. As I do, I make him put his hand by the cum I am licking. The melange of scents become a manly blend of cum, sweat and motor oil. Your story was fantastic. I loved the uniform fetish and admiration you have and how you brought it to life in the transformation. Every good transformation story makes you say, "I want to be transformed just like that." Your transformation story was perfect with becoming one with a hive mind of fellow officers (Fucking WOOF!), the bodily changes and the perfect masculine uniform to seal it all together. And again, I loved how you wrote it with that undertone of serious police talk (and making their voices low, deep and irresistable was perfection)

5/5/21, 10:04 AM
@PupScout wow, what a review! Yeah I really took the time to work on the transformation, exactly how I think new recruitments will happen (I've had that dream for ages now, so that's me trying to capture many nights into one story as best as I can). There are numerous other details I've skipped (this is quite a long boi), hopefully I can integrate that in other chapters. You saying this hits the spot makes me so psyched! I really think part of why many of us admire the uniform (apart from its inherent power and authority), is the influence it has to the world, to make changes for better or worse. I believe mixing it with a little bit of realism (eg "earning the right by passing the hive mind's criteria of a good peackeeper" as an alternative to "spending X years of your life to learn basic policing" ) enhances the experience more. A lot of my themes will revolve around that. And it's true to the opposite of course (the corrupt ones), wink wink :) Now excuse me, I've gotten hot again after reading your comments, which perfectly echoed my intentions hehe. That personal story though, it's out of this world. You managing to capture what I have only imagined is just amazing, you lucky pup!
5/5/21, 3:15 AM
I loved this story. You should do a continuation please
5/5/21, 1:42 AM
Will we see part2
5/4/21, 10:56 PM
PupAmp! Im a fan!
5/4/21, 10:24 PM
glad to see an update ur work is consistantly great
5/4/21, 9:22 PM
I hope to see the next part soon
7/3/20, 5:25 PM
Ok now I'm ready to read the whole 12,000-page, three-volume paperback series version of this…

5/4/21, 8:18 PM
@nick.m903 goddamn, man, I've been riding the high from this comment for most of a year now. You're gonna make a smutwright blush :D
5/4/21, 7:52 PM
A great story to read to make and keep my cock hard in my hand as I slow stroked it the whole time from first chapter through the last one.
5/4/21, 6:49 PM
I loved it!! It might have cut a little short but it was excellently written and I love the mystery behind the power. I hope you can share more with us!