Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/4/21, 5:28 PM
Great story! Not usually into inanimate transformation, but I though you nailed the progression of it and I thoroughly enjoyed the addition of his "toy thoughts" as it progressed. *Very* hot on all accounts. Also, if you are *the* PupAmp that's awesome and I'd love to see more writing, but if not, I'd still like to see more!
5/4/21, 5:23 PM
More. pls . ty
Dec 18, 2020
5/4/21, 5:15 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys! I've written a next chapter a couple times exploring directions. Still not satisfied with it. When I am I'll post what happens to Mike next. :)
5/4/21, 4:25 PM
Please continue, I like to know what Eris will do, hehe
5/4/21, 3:23 PM
Same question as the person above. First thought: that's a username I didn't expect to see here. Second thought: The title of this story is so punny,this might actually be Amp's work NOW back to reading the story EDIT: I liked it more than I thought. It was nice to see an already gay guy get it for a change. I think most stories I read are about straight guys. This was an unusual but fun read and a great first time story.
5/4/21, 1:18 PM
I liked it, it has been a long time since I enjoyed such a story so much (I have a weakness for power bottoms and dumb jocks). maybe we should leave certain topics for those who are familiar with them ...
Anonymous
5/3/21, 11:43 PM
I was confused by this though... if he drank the tonic himself... how would that get him back to the apothecary? Did he misunderstand the ritual and think he was supposed to drink it? If so, it would still be him trying to do things with his intended. How does Elio become the intended? And, if he was interested in Elio... why did he need the tonic in the first place? --- sorry.. just a continuity thing that didn't make sense to me. I thought the story and premise of the soldier affected was great though.

5/4/21, 12:29 PM
Doran did return for a reason, but that got snipped during editing and I hadn't considered the hole in the narrative. If I can get a part 2 out I'll include those passages for context.
5/4/21, 12:06 PM
Love the smoldering, almost fairy-tale-esque storytelling, the play of desire and denial, the beautifully rounded characters, the burgeoning world-building. Amazing work, my dude.
5/4/21, 11:55 AM
Hi, and Thanks! While there's going to be total immobilization in (at least) the next chapter, I just didn't know what category this fit into best.
John F
5/4/21, 11:53 AM
Hi Swizzington, Hope you are well. Really liked this story and it did read different to your others (which I loved just as much). I just wanted to say thank you for taking the time to write all of these and that I am very much looking forward to reading anything else you write, in (hopefully) the near future :p Thanks, JF