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2/13/25, 8:27 AM
The issue of raceplay is an interesting one. I fantasize as a submissive bottom aroused by the thought of being seduced, dominated and controlled by strong-willed intelligent admirable men. I am a white male aesthetically attracted to dominant men of all races, ethnicities, and cultures, but generally more so to men who are exotic to my own experience. Tall with darker skin, eyes and hair are one such 'look'. As it happens most black men have physical features with this very attractive 'look'. When i put all this together, I don't feel that my own story is raceplay -- even as a white male fantasizing about being dominated and controlled by a black man (or men!!). In the case of this story, I think representing the accents, wordage, or images of the real former slave economy of American history is the step that makes this story raceplay. In my mind this confuses and shifts the feel of the story away from an erotic consensual nature toward something more reminiscent of the immoral reality of historical slavery. Even though that aspect of the story will, i expect, turn some people off, this is still a fantasy of the author who is envisioning himself in a submissive role. Together as a group we have a wide range of kinks and perspectives on what is for each of us arousing or not. We each have to pick and choose the stories which appeal to ourselves, and respect those whose perspectives differ from our own.
2/10/25, 9:37 PM
While I do understand that people are a sucker for a good romantic ending. It would be nice to have a non canon bad ending too! I personally love those.

2/10/25, 9:49 PM
@[Anon529373](/user/show/541335) Perhaps...but it would be after the epilogue if I did...and there are a few people that might come after me if I hurt Colt or Rocky too much (I'm not kidding, lol) Trust me...there were ideas for it and I almost did a few things different. Chase in particularly got off better than I expected. He's lucky I purged that day's writing (It was a bad, bad week when I wrote the first draft...)

2/11/25, 6:34 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) Exciting! There are definitely a few ways to see it being done without hurting colt and Rocky. But I would love to read more of your work regardless. It’s very well written!

2/13/25, 8:25 AM
@[Anon529373](/user/show/541335) Sorry guess I’m replying in more than one place tonight…. I guess I also thought colt and rocky and chase couldn’t all end up together. Not sure if that’s in the cards … sorry lots of thoughts. I can’t wait to see where you go with this… I even thought of like a weird Brax thing with colt. Like after you had him call colt boss. I was thinking you were somehow going to make colt somehow link to being like leviathan, some connection that made their powers similar but colt uses them for good of course.
2/11/25, 2:49 PM
This was amazing! I do have to say though I was waiting for the moment where Colt and Rocky would kiss and fall in love haha!

2/11/25, 3:12 PM
@[Dude](/user/show/925729) oh, don't worry...there is an epilogue...

2/13/25, 8:20 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) This is what I’ve been waiting to hear. I was like there’s no way this is how the story ends. Like do they even figure out how they truly feel about each other! Can’t wait for the release!
Anonymous
2/13/25, 4:06 AM
Wow, this was amazing. Please continue this soon!
2/13/25, 12:33 AM
Once again writing really hot weight gain and mental degradation stuff here. I really like the interplay between the three roommates and particularly Dan’s response to his other roommate becoming a Pig. Dan saying he expected everyone to get Porcinitis eventually is interesting. Excited to see what happens with him. I asked about porn in the previous chapter’s comments and this chapter really paid off for in that regard. Wonder if they have porn-making stuff at some of the farms for a supplemental income. I really love it when you flesh out (heh) the details of this new world. Like how the boss has gotten fatter than a Stage 2 Pig all by himself and the whole Pig employment-exit stuff.
Anonymous
2/13/25, 12:25 AM
Made my asshole wink
2/12/25, 11:38 PM
One of the best I've read in a long time. I keep checking to see if a new chapter is posted. I have so many questions - how far has Brad progressed since we last saw him? Will Ted be able to get into the same facility? Will Ted remain the only narrator as he descends into eternal blissful haze? I'm trying to imagine the pink Pig skin - is it tight, turning pink instead of gaining stretchmarks? Or does it feel soft and droopy, like when a fat person loses weight?
Werja go?
2/12/25, 11:29 PM
I really wish to know what made you stop, suddenly disappearing, after you had promised next chapter would be before 2024. It never was. Did anything happen? Did you may be, and hopefully not, die? I truly wish you are ok. Not just because I want you to continue writing, but mostly so. Sorry, really I am. I mean, if I say otherwise, it will obviously be a lie. Sorry. If you are still there, I believe one day, you'll rise from the ashes and return to writing, this one, the other and maybe more.
Feb 11, 2025
2/11/25, 1:30 PM
Fucking amazing man...i am hooked!

2/12/25, 9:45 PM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) Thanks Jack! Always appreciate your support. :)
2/12/25, 9:36 PM
Weight gain isn't my thing but this is a gripping story. I can't help but wonder if/when Dan will contract it given how much time he's spent around an infected Pig.