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Jan 18, 2017
7/8/25, 10:36 PM
One of my all time favorites! Thanks!
7/6/25, 4:28 AM
Great chapter! Hayden is slowly sinking and doesn't even realize it. I love that! And I hope Markus ends up becoming Daddy Jason's son too. Just imagine, Daddy Jason went after a son and ended up getting two for the price of one.

7/6/25, 4:35 AM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) I will say, the church mostly focuses on converting straight men into Sons, though it's possible they might make an exception for Markus. Only time will tell...

7/6/25, 8:37 PM
@[Bovine Retribution](/user/show/10032242) Interesting… if they only convert straight boys to Sons, could Markus end up recruited to be a Daddy? I mean, if the church is growing, they’ll need more Daddys for all the new sons. Also makes me wonder if the Daddy’s are really in their 50s or with all the magic and reality bending going on, if the Daddys are made to appear in their 50s? So many interesting possibilities for this story. Please keep going and add new chapters soon!

7/7/25, 11:36 PM
@[Thalog](/user/show/10033108) I can reveal rn, Markus is a lot more likely to be recruited as a Daddy than as a Son. Beyond that, I can’t reveal much. And as for the Daddy’s ages, we’ll probably get into a bit more in the later chapters, but let’s just say very few things are as they seem with The Church.

7/8/25, 12:30 AM
@[Bovine Retribution](/user/show/10032242) Interesting! After @[Thalog](/user/show/10033108)'s comment, I imagined that Markus' lore could really go down this path, with him being recruited to become a future Daddy of the church. It's good that this way we'll be able to see in a single story what the initiation process is like for a new son (Hayden), and what the initiation process is like for a new Daddy (Markus).

7/8/25, 10:32 PM
@[Bovine Retribution](/user/show/10032242) thank you for that tease of info. This story has so much potential. It is both highly erotic and a really good fantasy story. I’m hooked for the duration.
Anonymous
7/8/25, 8:40 PM
That footnote. Dominating your readers with a cocky smirk. So hot. So Well written. Thanks for bitching us out and making us cum 🫦
7/8/25, 8:37 PM
I've enjoyed this story very much, but did miss the resolution of them finding the sigil and then deciding NOT to break it....
7/8/25, 8:23 PM
Where can I get that suit and goggles again?
6/4/25, 6:19 PM
i love this! Oh to have a Master who has this level of control and enjoys using it to establish His dominance so clearly!! i love hypnosis as a tool of control, and the depth of control represented here is incredible. To be able to take His submissive to a hypnotic depth necessary for either hypnotic hallucination or amnesia is so amazingly hot! Convincing His new boy that it must behave in so many ways like a dog that is inferior and submissive to its own dog creates a powerful image. It demonstrates just how deep is the power and control of its new Master, particularly when the boy's own dog so clearly recognizes that the Alpha in control of this situation is the slave's new Master. The only thing better than reading a hot Master/slave story like this would be to be owned by such a powerful Master in real life.

Littledickslave@yahoo.com
6/7/25, 4:05 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thank you. I'm glad you find this inspiring and I hope you are providing yourself physical pleasure as you enjoy what I have written.

6/23/25, 6:59 PM
@Littledickslave@yahoo.com i have just read this chapter again, and again it's perfect! To choose to accept complete power exchange with such an intelligent, dominant, admirable Master as this is such a turn-on! To become an obedient fully trained pet for such a Master is truly inspiring, and yes i found myself augmenting the story's power with my own "lover" and some painful teasing twists of my growing points of pleasure when you and your Master inspired it. This chapter touched more strongly on race-play, which somewhat like even thinking about using the 'n-word' always makes me a little nervous about being inappropriate or disrespectful. Still i am gay and strongly attracted physically to black men. i am also attracted to tall dark and handsome Irish men with blue-black hair and blue eyes, but less so than to black men...and indeed to so many other beautiful men. i am by nature submissive and attracted to dominant men who are strong-willed, know their minds, and are resilient in the face of injustice and unfounded prejudice. i believe that searching for a black Man to be my Master provides much better than average odds for finding the kind of Man i yearn for -- the kind of Master you write about in this story. One might wonder if i might feel disrespected as a white boy by the kind of treatment our boy receives. i don't. Firstly, i love the idea of being owned, controlled, and used by a black Man, and secondly there is something right and appropriate with karma. While i have not been directly or knowingly responsible for racism, it does give me joy to feel i might be responsible in any small way to compensate for racist-based social injustices.

7/8/25, 7:39 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Thank you for your comment. My Master is glad to hear you are finding this narrative so inspiring. Obviously, I agree with you about the superiority of Black Men. I don't think I was ever attracted the Black Men before my Master took ownership, but now I find white boys to be not just unattractive, but in many ways repellent. While I sometimes am offered to other dark skinned Men like Latinos and Asians and Middle Easterners, virtually the only Men I now serve are Black. I am very lucky that way.
Jul 2, 2025
7/8/25, 7:33 PM
Best goon story I have ever read! When im unlocked Im definitely coming right back haha
7/8/25, 3:39 PM
This man MARTIN is going to really enjoy his new friend Alex. i am excited to learn about all the ways that Alex will take-advantage of his new power over Martin. He is gonna be a "Marty" before too long!

7/8/25, 7:24 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) 😜😘
Elm
7/8/25, 5:10 PM
Such a cleverly written story! this one HAS to win!
Maso
7/7/25, 5:20 AM
How old are Frank and Joe? If I recall, in the end of the books, they were 17-19 range. Does this take place after or before they're adults?

7/8/25, 2:51 PM
@Maso "Adult" is a very subjective term. Physically, most men are fully grown adults at around 14-15. Mentally, most men aren't adults way into their twenties.

7/8/25, 4:45 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) This. Also 17-19 is pretty much legal in most of the US and the world.