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2/12/25, 7:50 PM
I love how you started Chapter 1 - got me hooked right away. The story moved well and was definitely has me wanting more.
Dec 17, 2018
2/12/25, 1:17 PM
This was a fun story. Would love to see more of these
2/12/25, 11:16 AM
What a great story. I just read the first chapter yesterday and got so hooked that I read everything in these two days. While I do like bad ends I have to say that I enjoyed how things played out. The ending was very satisfying and felt real. I'm looking forward to the epilogue and whatever you have next! I hope it's another superhero story but im sure I'll enjoy anything you write and I'll have to read your past stories as well. Thanks again for such a great story!

2/12/25, 12:54 PM
@[AxelCyclone](/user/show/44164) Oh wow! I’m glad you enjoyed. I’m planning a sequel series to this and it’s in the outline Phase. I have a fantasy series that I’m currently working on. While I figure that one out. On part 3 of right now.
Anonymous
2/12/25, 5:51 AM
This is really some of the best wg fiction out there 10/10 so far!
2/12/25, 4:11 AM
great story, can’t wait for the next chapter.
2/12/25, 3:56 AM
Sent some suggestions, if the goal of the game is to diverge so far from the main story. Love this concept.
2/12/25, 3:16 AM
I just enjoy it a lot. Thanks man!
Staci39Z1
2/12/25, 3:16 AM
I am like so horny for cock. Giggles haha
2/11/25, 10:45 PM
That was quite the combat sequence. How it embed and flowed. Who had the upper hand and when. Plus, I am so glad you got the two guys to fuse as they did. I have been curious how or if that was possible. And if they could do it, what other combinations are there? Though I was a bit disappointed in Red. Such a strong and level headed leader to be so...reduced to an artificial purpose. At first I thought he was rushing in to help, but he was only trying to help himself. And then that cliffhanger. Looks like the someone gets a redemption arc. Looks like Nick and Mom have been busy behind the scenes. Is he in his old uniform again?

2/11/25, 11:10 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Glad you enjoyed it! :) I had fun with this chapter! Yes, Red is meant to be a disappointment here. His 'fall' is tied to something we'll see when **H-3** gets back to base, but I won't spoil it here. There's something,... _'odd'_ in this chapter that's related to it. And, as for our returning hero,... you'll be seeing how he comes back into the picture in the next chapter (I think,... never trust me when it comes to deadlines or word limits!) Cheers! And thanks again!

2/12/25, 1:35 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) You are welcome to make the chapters as long as you need. And thank you for being as consistent as you are. Your are the only active author writing for this genre and to this detail. There was Neon Demon, with his 'Rubber and Capes,' but he hasn't posted in almost a year. And as to that 'odd' thing, I'll have to reread the chapter to see what that could be.

2/12/25, 2:26 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) The 'odd' thing is a matter of perspective,... don't worry if it doesn't jump out. It'll be called out and addressed when we get back to this group after the next chapter.
2/11/25, 2:15 PM
This was everything I hoped it would be. I agree with others that a dark "bad ending" needs to be made.

2/12/25, 12:31 AM
@[hypnopaladin](/user/show/10058683) I tried to make one...and I did NOT work for me. I think the epilogue will end this and if people enjoy a second story, one will come...Rocky and Colt have a lot more trouble to get into.