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5/3/21, 1:21 PM
love it so far. hope to read more.
boi98229
5/3/21, 12:59 PM
For the most part i really like this story, but was put off by the non-consensual nature of the relationships and the level of humiliation and depravity forced on someone. It seemed to me that Ian and Jake turned out to be just as morally corrupt as the guy they brought down. Nevertheless the process of achieving that level of control though was really hot.
5/3/21, 12:32 PM
love it! hope theres more
5/3/21, 12:11 PM
Great story! You had me hard and leaking the hole time. Always fantasized about sex with my doctor and you brought it to life. Very descriptive writing as I could visualize all the action going on. Many more chapters, please!
5/1/21, 12:08 AM
The style you wrote this fit perfectly with the theme of the story. And great match with the cops. I'll take the one of the bottom right of the first picture. This was an enticing set up. Looking forward to moving into it.

5/3/21, 11:04 AM
@PupScout Thank you for the compliment! I hope I do justice to the rest of the chapters, more hot scenes coming as well. Great choice on the cop!
4/9/21, 11:32 PM
This was great. I agree with you, the jock/bro clothes are hotter. And the forced messing scene was fun, I wouldn't be upset if there was more of that ;)

5/3/21, 9:59 AM
Indeed, you should read the next part ;) @Showsomerestraints
CandyDarky
4/25/21, 8:39 AM
So hot! I love how Scott was treated like trash and the addition of the chewed banana was a nice touch, you really know how to make good use of the time stop genre

5/3/21, 9:59 AM
Thanks! @CandyDarky
5/3/21, 8:11 AM
Wow Daniel, now speaks the truth, He is Gay. a bit of a fight to get it out of him, but he is out now, maybe to only a few at the moment, but I can see this will be common knowledge soon enough. Also seems that all the guys so far who wear a uniform are also Gay. Like how he thought he was not attracted to women - keep this going, its only getting better and better and once he gets his next fix of "taffy", I think he will know exactly who HE is. The Gay Sheriff of his town.
5/3/21, 7:44 AM
I love the premise here, and I think that some of the visuals are great. My main problem with the story is that the characters don't seem to have distinct personalities. We get descriptions of their haircuts, but that's about it. And with about 10 crew members to keep track of, they all seem to blur together.
5/3/21, 6:28 AM
please keep this story going one of my favorites so far