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5/3/21, 12:32 PM
love it! hope theres more
5/3/21, 12:11 PM
Great story! You had me hard and leaking the hole time. Always fantasized about sex with my doctor and you brought it to life. Very descriptive writing as I could visualize all the action going on. Many more chapters, please!
5/1/21, 12:08 AM
The style you wrote this fit perfectly with the theme of the story. And great match with the cops. I'll take the one of the bottom right of the first picture. This was an enticing set up. Looking forward to moving into it.

5/3/21, 11:04 AM
@PupScout Thank you for the compliment! I hope I do justice to the rest of the chapters, more hot scenes coming as well. Great choice on the cop!
4/9/21, 11:32 PM
This was great. I agree with you, the jock/bro clothes are hotter. And the forced messing scene was fun, I wouldn't be upset if there was more of that ;)

5/3/21, 9:59 AM
Indeed, you should read the next part ;) @Showsomerestraints
CandyDarky
4/25/21, 8:39 AM
So hot! I love how Scott was treated like trash and the addition of the chewed banana was a nice touch, you really know how to make good use of the time stop genre

5/3/21, 9:59 AM
Thanks! @CandyDarky
5/3/21, 8:11 AM
Wow Daniel, now speaks the truth, He is Gay. a bit of a fight to get it out of him, but he is out now, maybe to only a few at the moment, but I can see this will be common knowledge soon enough. Also seems that all the guys so far who wear a uniform are also Gay. Like how he thought he was not attracted to women - keep this going, its only getting better and better and once he gets his next fix of "taffy", I think he will know exactly who HE is. The Gay Sheriff of his town.
5/3/21, 7:44 AM
I love the premise here, and I think that some of the visuals are great. My main problem with the story is that the characters don't seem to have distinct personalities. We get descriptions of their haircuts, but that's about it. And with about 10 crew members to keep track of, they all seem to blur together.
5/3/21, 6:28 AM
please keep this story going one of my favorites so far
Anonymous
5/3/21, 5:16 AM
hot story. I was hoping you'd go further with the panties. Like making Mike wear them all the time and making him instantly turned on and rock hard when he feels the soft lace fabric against his dick, even though he hates wearing them. Would be hot if he can only cum when he's either sucking dick in the panties, or getting fucked in them. Also loved how Gary wouldn't fuck Mike and humiliated him more. I like your writing style, but there are some parts of the story I wish you'd draw out more. Like Gary making Mike beg to get fucked and humiliating him more, or making Mike lick his load off the floor, or describing how Mike felt walking back to his cabin with Gary's load dripping out of his pussy and a wet stain forming on his pants/shorts.
5/2/21, 6:32 PM
Awesome start - has all the makings of a great story/series - Anything taking control of cops works for me - and everything else is amazing too!! Hoping there is more to cum (soon!) !! -M1

5/3/21, 1:10 AM
@M1Robocop Thanks for the feedback! Because of your comment, Chapter 2 includes a short tangent with more Cops. I can promise you this, I was already thinking about some future installment all about Cops and what happens to them when they cross this outfit. It might get graphic. But remember the story is just fantasy. I'm a Cop myself.

5/3/21, 2:05 AM
@CFlex Glad you enoyed my video man! And you're really a cop? That's so hot for some reason...A super kinky cop haha.

5/3/21, 4:26 AM
@CFlex