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5/3/21, 6:28 AM
please keep this story going one of my favorites so far
Anonymous
5/3/21, 5:16 AM
hot story. I was hoping you'd go further with the panties. Like making Mike wear them all the time and making him instantly turned on and rock hard when he feels the soft lace fabric against his dick, even though he hates wearing them. Would be hot if he can only cum when he's either sucking dick in the panties, or getting fucked in them. Also loved how Gary wouldn't fuck Mike and humiliated him more. I like your writing style, but there are some parts of the story I wish you'd draw out more. Like Gary making Mike beg to get fucked and humiliating him more, or making Mike lick his load off the floor, or describing how Mike felt walking back to his cabin with Gary's load dripping out of his pussy and a wet stain forming on his pants/shorts.
5/2/21, 6:32 PM
Awesome start - has all the makings of a great story/series - Anything taking control of cops works for me - and everything else is amazing too!! Hoping there is more to cum (soon!) !! -M1

5/3/21, 1:10 AM
@M1Robocop Thanks for the feedback! Because of your comment, Chapter 2 includes a short tangent with more Cops. I can promise you this, I was already thinking about some future installment all about Cops and what happens to them when they cross this outfit. It might get graphic. But remember the story is just fantasy. I'm a Cop myself.

5/3/21, 2:05 AM
@CFlex Glad you enoyed my video man! And you're really a cop? That's so hot for some reason...A super kinky cop haha.

5/3/21, 4:26 AM
@CFlex
5/3/21, 3:46 AM
great story! If you could write another chapter of maybe his new life as a cock slut that would be absolutely amazing! Thank you for the great story, I hope you write more!
nycboot
5/3/21, 12:10 AM
It's a little weird, but I'm liking this!

5/3/21, 1:11 AM
Haha yeah it's a bit different from my normal works, first attempt at sci-fi. @nycboot
5/2/21, 10:03 PM
Shhhhh no spoilers, haha 😆. I haven't forgotten about him 😉. Hope you enjoyed

5/2/21, 11:48 PM
@ArdanWolfe LOVING IT!

5/3/21, 1:09 AM
@Papa Werebear Thank you, this is the first work I feel really connected to as a writer. That it's a bit deeper than just "spank bank" writing 🤣
Muscle-Flex
5/2/21, 4:13 PM
Whew! Hot! The description was excellent, made even better by the helpless reactions of Grant and Owens. Can't wait to see the packaging for transport continue.

5/3/21, 12:59 AM
@Muscle-Flex Thanks! The thought of knowing what's going to happen to you, with no way of stopping it, has always gets me going, that's why the perspective bounces back and forth. You were able to pick that out, so I must have done something right!
5/2/21, 12:52 PM
Incredible! So hot

5/3/21, 12:54 AM
@gotacoolname Thanks buddy!
5/1/21, 3:29 PM
This story is amazing man! Right up my alley! Can't wait to see how they are tormented further!

5/3/21, 12:53 AM
@TieMeEdgeMe Thank You! Enjoyed your edging video. I'm working on the next chapter
5/1/21, 2:37 PM
This is crazy-hot! The plugging of poor Grant is amazingly well-told!

5/3/21, 12:50 AM
@FreeThinker Thanks! I enjoyed "Adjustment Study". It got me hard. Hope this one did for you.