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5/1/21, 3:10 AM
Bravo-Bravo nice chapter. But now I'm curious? When they are demons there are always not far behind angels. I don't remember hearing anything about angels in your older stories of the "devil by my side". That makes you curious. Are the demon for up the whole earth without a fight, or some Angel are going to start appearing and attempt to stop the demon corruption.

5/1/21, 9:47 AM
Well @Big-Zargo 12, Thank you for your comment. It’s so nice to see you are enjoying the story! We're not keen on revealing any details ahead of future chapters - we like to keep you guessing! But, what would you like to see? How do you envision angels entering into the equation?

5/1/21, 11:47 PM
@HunkLover The fact you asked if I would like to see the Angels implemented a story, says a few things. To Answer questions, they may be a few ways to incorporate Angels: one; some form of arbiter/a being of balance informs the Angels to a present a summon, and when people start becoming corrupted it grabbed their attention. Two; like the first one I suggested, angels could notice the corruption of souls. Especially since you left a loose end. That poor wife is probably worried about her husband especially if he doesn't come home. Three; the Angels could notice some of the reality warping/changes the demons are making. Four; a group of humans and/or Angel guardians designed to protect the world from demonic threats. This also kind depends on how often demons are summoned. Five; a person summoned the angel. This can either on purpose or by accident. You can even make a counterpart to the human bonds with the demon. Six; a demon tells the angel. Either out of spite from our big red demon, accident and/or Angels torturing a demon. This still leaves plenty of questions of how you going to plan to implement these Angels and what they can Do, and how well they look. Not all angels humanoid with wings.

5/2/21, 10:51 PM
Oh wow @Big-Zargo 12! You've clearly given this as much thought as we have... as I've said before, I don't want to give anything away, but the one thing I will say is that I'm a completionist - loose ends don't fit well with me!
5/2/21, 6:50 PM
what an incredible story so far. keep going! this is deliciously evil, hot and very well written.

5/2/21, 10:50 PM
Thank you, @Mrdick! We aim to please and are glad you're enjoying it!
5/2/21, 9:27 PM
Wonder if Billy's dad is going to be sired by Billy too? 😉
5/2/21, 8:32 PM
cant wait to read the epilogue and see how everything ends
Anonymous
5/2/21, 7:31 PM
This was amazing! I too hope for more!
Muscle-Flex
4/30/21, 1:28 PM
Fantastic! The personal trainer gets quite a workout of his own! Maybe could have done with a little bit more of Mike's reactions while he's at the pool party - because his stupefied reactions to what happens to him are some of the best parts - usually both erotic and comical, but this was a fun new chapter. The scene of Mike sliding the magician along the wall and into the storage closet was really clever... along with the way Mike couldn't escape the magician's voice fast enough. Haha! Now the question is what is going to go on in Mike's head and body after the scene at the pool? Surely he is enraged, but might he be a little turned on too? Could be a very slippery slope for Mike.

5/2/21, 7:26 PM
@Muscle-Flex thanks for the extensive response and yes Mike will pondering his pool incident in the next chapter ;-)
4/30/21, 6:08 AM
keep it going!! Clearly mike is transforming!! give our hero the happy ending he deserves! A hot straight muscle hunk turned into his submissive devoted lover.

5/2/21, 7:24 PM
@Curt T. sounds hot
5/2/21, 6:57 PM
well done! you transitioned from well written wank material into just a full on well written story.
5/2/21, 6:31 PM
very hot man! I'd love to read more!
5/2/21, 4:59 PM
oh my god that is fucking hot!!! i LOVE both characters, Hank is so fucking arrogant and persistent, and the way he whispers in Arnie's ear while he's taking possession is fucking hot! Arnie's resistance is hot and perfectly timed. i was hard the minute you planned me to be... fuck! Well done! i felt like the mind control was almost secondary, it was almost an subtle undertone to Hank's and Arnie's awakening. perfect balance of power!!! MORE PLEASE!!! YOU ARE A GIFTED WRITER. Frank