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5/2/21, 8:32 PM
cant wait to read the epilogue and see how everything ends
Anonymous
5/2/21, 7:31 PM
This was amazing! I too hope for more!
Muscle-Flex
4/30/21, 1:28 PM
Fantastic! The personal trainer gets quite a workout of his own! Maybe could have done with a little bit more of Mike's reactions while he's at the pool party - because his stupefied reactions to what happens to him are some of the best parts - usually both erotic and comical, but this was a fun new chapter. The scene of Mike sliding the magician along the wall and into the storage closet was really clever... along with the way Mike couldn't escape the magician's voice fast enough. Haha! Now the question is what is going to go on in Mike's head and body after the scene at the pool? Surely he is enraged, but might he be a little turned on too? Could be a very slippery slope for Mike.

5/2/21, 7:26 PM
@Muscle-Flex thanks for the extensive response and yes Mike will pondering his pool incident in the next chapter ;-)
4/30/21, 6:08 AM
keep it going!! Clearly mike is transforming!! give our hero the happy ending he deserves! A hot straight muscle hunk turned into his submissive devoted lover.

5/2/21, 7:24 PM
@Curt T. sounds hot
5/2/21, 6:57 PM
well done! you transitioned from well written wank material into just a full on well written story.
5/2/21, 6:31 PM
very hot man! I'd love to read more!
5/2/21, 4:59 PM
oh my god that is fucking hot!!! i LOVE both characters, Hank is so fucking arrogant and persistent, and the way he whispers in Arnie's ear while he's taking possession is fucking hot! Arnie's resistance is hot and perfectly timed. i was hard the minute you planned me to be... fuck! Well done! i felt like the mind control was almost secondary, it was almost an subtle undertone to Hank's and Arnie's awakening. perfect balance of power!!! MORE PLEASE!!! YOU ARE A GIFTED WRITER. Frank
5/2/21, 4:42 PM
very good! cant wait for the next part.
5/2/21, 4:07 PM
I am liking this more and more, Daniel, now has a southern accent, hope it gets more so. The other part I liked is how he is disgusted by the smell of his wife, thats a good start, next he needs to feel the same about women full stop. Also I like that fact that he is coming to terms with fooling around with HIS deputies - I hope that once Daniel comes to terms that he is the Sheriff, there will be a uniform waiting for him, looking forward to seeing more - Thanks
May 4, 2020
5/2/21, 3:44 PM
Amazing story, very original, please continue.