Recent Comments

5/2/21, 6:31 PM
very hot man! I'd love to read more!
5/2/21, 4:59 PM
oh my god that is fucking hot!!! i LOVE both characters, Hank is so fucking arrogant and persistent, and the way he whispers in Arnie's ear while he's taking possession is fucking hot! Arnie's resistance is hot and perfectly timed. i was hard the minute you planned me to be... fuck! Well done! i felt like the mind control was almost secondary, it was almost an subtle undertone to Hank's and Arnie's awakening. perfect balance of power!!! MORE PLEASE!!! YOU ARE A GIFTED WRITER. Frank
5/2/21, 4:42 PM
very good! cant wait for the next part.
5/2/21, 4:07 PM
I am liking this more and more, Daniel, now has a southern accent, hope it gets more so. The other part I liked is how he is disgusted by the smell of his wife, thats a good start, next he needs to feel the same about women full stop. Also I like that fact that he is coming to terms with fooling around with HIS deputies - I hope that once Daniel comes to terms that he is the Sheriff, there will be a uniform waiting for him, looking forward to seeing more - Thanks
May 4, 2020
5/2/21, 3:44 PM
Amazing story, very original, please continue.
5/2/21, 3:36 PM
super excited for another installment, this one had me edged the whole time
Anonymous
5/2/21, 11:11 AM
Could you write the story about the younger brother taking the revenge on his father and older brother by making them younger and innocent. I think it will be hot.
5/2/21, 11:06 AM
Where can I find a guy like Frederick's? The stories continues to make me harder...gotta read more!
5/2/21, 10:55 AM
Great beginning! You got me tented and leaking..wanting more..this could go many ways, each hot and exciting!
5/2/21, 10:41 AM
This is a really good story with a unique twist, enjoyed it.