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5/1/21, 9:18 AM
I'm loving the humor involved with Dan's brainwashing-induced pyschosis. You had me waking up my housemates with "hangry"
5/1/21, 9:04 AM
Damn. Feeling bad for the both of them. Something that crossed my mind though i hadn't thought about before is what happens if Willem goes back to being "straight" and can't get into being fucked but still has feelings for Jake. This is the kind of messy romance drama we love to see! Waiting as always for the next chapter!
Anonymous
5/1/21, 8:12 AM
Amazing story!
4/29/21, 11:02 PM
Wow, I'm really loving this series. I love the conversion, even though it does seem strange of taking a civilian out. LOL I am excited to read the next part, and see some forced conversions. It was hinted about, but I would love to see some scallys, or preppys, (or both at the same time?), or criminals forced to turn over a new leaf (from a first person perspective). Again, awesome work, and keep it up.

4/30/21, 3:36 AM
@Gay_Genes Thank you! And thank you for the feedback! I did have mixed feelings prior to releasing this re the hive mind conversion, so your reaction gave me a hint how to go about it :) Yes to forced conversions! A scally and a criminal conversion story are also in the pipeline, I'm excited to show that :)

4/30/21, 1:00 PM
So glad to know the forced conversion is coming!!! Good story. @symbiotesrpb

4/30/21, 2:31 PM
@Tofu83 thanks mate! It needs to be done in the hottest way possible that makes sense in this world. Watch out for it :)

4/30/21, 4:30 PM
@symbiotesrpb I'm glad I could give some ideas. I think one really strong point of your story is while there is a forced conversion, there is both a cross of eroticism as well as romance. There is some level of happiness and cathartic release of being forced into a hive mind that you were able to illustrate quite well, instead of it being torture or a bad punishment. Please keep up the excellent work.

5/1/21, 7:51 AM
@Gay_Genes yeah I agree, and there will be torturous conversions later on, unfortunately I'm painfully optimistic lols, I plan to have a good enough reason for the forced conversion to happen, to make a really special case for it instead of randomly forcing conversion just because. Thank you for the encouraging words man, I'm pumped to write on!
CandyDarky
5/1/21, 5:03 AM
I love this story so much. It’s so hot to see James’s perfect life be degraded and changed just for Aaron pleasure. Keep writing you are very good at it!
Corey
5/1/21, 3:21 AM
You always write good stories. I dont mind reading anything. If I dont like it, I know someone else will :). be yourself and do what you want. some of the awesome stories just pop up :). Cant wait to read other stories you make. Also love your profile photo/
4/30/21, 9:25 PM
wow, I didn't see the mirror twist coming

5/1/21, 3:10 AM
@darkblade2814 Happy to hear i can keep you on your toes XD
5/1/21, 1:48 AM
this story felt political and i didnt care for that, dont really read mind control stories for a dose of reality. just my take though.

5/1/21, 2:07 AM
@Mordred different strokes for different folks, I suppose. I enjoy writing social commentary into my stories.
4/30/21, 11:55 PM
Well if you want the opinion of an amab nb man, it was a great story. I know I don't have the same experiences so I won't comment on that part, but I really enjoyed how you built the characters. I'll admit that I'm a huge nipple guy so that dysphoria was a bit of a bummer for me selfishly, but you did it in a character-building way which I can appreciate as a writing choice.

5/1/21, 2:05 AM
@Razz TFs Thank you. <3. I appreciate it
5/1/21, 12:54 AM
Well as a gay man I cannot comment on most of this concept. I will say though that it was extremely well-written and even though it was not to my taste I enjoyed reading it. My only criticism was it seemed that you kind of got lost in the sex scene a couple times talking about Sam being a top which was surprising but at the same time he was completely bottoming in the scene which was confusing. So that kind of took me out of the little bit of the story that I was connecting with. Still as always though excellent writing. I look forward to your next one.