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7/9/25, 1:14 AM
This was hot!
7/9/25, 12:38 AM
so hott!! i hope you continue through their transformations but if not, such a good story cant wait to stalk the author page
7/9/25, 12:37 AM
so hot!! was excited for the friends to get together and you somehow made it hotter that i thought it would be!
7/8/25, 4:44 PM
Awesome story! Love it so much...it doesn't get much better than this!

7/9/25, 12:03 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) Thank you! I’m glad you liked where I took things.
7/8/25, 5:41 PM
Really like the concept here - you get the banter and attitude really well for people being dicks to one another in some game server. It's a cool setting for this kind of mind and body transformation. Cool bit of writing.

7/8/25, 10:40 PM
@[Reynard](/user/show/912500) Thanks a ton! I’ve been playing way too much Marvel Rivals lately, so I tried to capture the vibe of people in those voice chat lobbies, lol
Jan 18, 2017
7/8/25, 10:36 PM
One of my all time favorites! Thanks!
7/6/25, 4:28 AM
Great chapter! Hayden is slowly sinking and doesn't even realize it. I love that! And I hope Markus ends up becoming Daddy Jason's son too. Just imagine, Daddy Jason went after a son and ended up getting two for the price of one.

7/6/25, 4:35 AM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) I will say, the church mostly focuses on converting straight men into Sons, though it's possible they might make an exception for Markus. Only time will tell...

7/6/25, 8:37 PM
@[Bovine Retribution](/user/show/10032242) Interesting… if they only convert straight boys to Sons, could Markus end up recruited to be a Daddy? I mean, if the church is growing, they’ll need more Daddys for all the new sons. Also makes me wonder if the Daddy’s are really in their 50s or with all the magic and reality bending going on, if the Daddys are made to appear in their 50s? So many interesting possibilities for this story. Please keep going and add new chapters soon!

7/7/25, 11:36 PM
@[Thalog](/user/show/10033108) I can reveal rn, Markus is a lot more likely to be recruited as a Daddy than as a Son. Beyond that, I can’t reveal much. And as for the Daddy’s ages, we’ll probably get into a bit more in the later chapters, but let’s just say very few things are as they seem with The Church.

7/8/25, 12:30 AM
@[Bovine Retribution](/user/show/10032242) Interesting! After @[Thalog](/user/show/10033108)'s comment, I imagined that Markus' lore could really go down this path, with him being recruited to become a future Daddy of the church. It's good that this way we'll be able to see in a single story what the initiation process is like for a new son (Hayden), and what the initiation process is like for a new Daddy (Markus).

7/8/25, 10:32 PM
@[Bovine Retribution](/user/show/10032242) thank you for that tease of info. This story has so much potential. It is both highly erotic and a really good fantasy story. I’m hooked for the duration.
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7/8/25, 8:40 PM
That footnote. Dominating your readers with a cocky smirk. So hot. So Well written. Thanks for bitching us out and making us cum 🫦
7/8/25, 8:37 PM
I've enjoyed this story very much, but did miss the resolution of them finding the sigil and then deciding NOT to break it....
7/8/25, 8:23 PM
Where can I get that suit and goggles again?