Recent Comments

CandyDarky
5/1/21, 5:03 AM
I love this story so much. It’s so hot to see James’s perfect life be degraded and changed just for Aaron pleasure. Keep writing you are very good at it!
Corey
5/1/21, 3:21 AM
You always write good stories. I dont mind reading anything. If I dont like it, I know someone else will :). be yourself and do what you want. some of the awesome stories just pop up :). Cant wait to read other stories you make. Also love your profile photo/
4/30/21, 9:25 PM
wow, I didn't see the mirror twist coming

5/1/21, 3:10 AM
@darkblade2814 Happy to hear i can keep you on your toes XD
5/1/21, 1:48 AM
this story felt political and i didnt care for that, dont really read mind control stories for a dose of reality. just my take though.

5/1/21, 2:07 AM
@Mordred different strokes for different folks, I suppose. I enjoy writing social commentary into my stories.
4/30/21, 11:55 PM
Well if you want the opinion of an amab nb man, it was a great story. I know I don't have the same experiences so I won't comment on that part, but I really enjoyed how you built the characters. I'll admit that I'm a huge nipple guy so that dysphoria was a bit of a bummer for me selfishly, but you did it in a character-building way which I can appreciate as a writing choice.

5/1/21, 2:05 AM
@Razz TFs Thank you. <3. I appreciate it
5/1/21, 12:54 AM
Well as a gay man I cannot comment on most of this concept. I will say though that it was extremely well-written and even though it was not to my taste I enjoyed reading it. My only criticism was it seemed that you kind of got lost in the sex scene a couple times talking about Sam being a top which was surprising but at the same time he was completely bottoming in the scene which was confusing. So that kind of took me out of the little bit of the story that I was connecting with. Still as always though excellent writing. I look forward to your next one.
4/30/21, 11:09 PM
I'm really glade you made another chapter so fast. I can't wait to see what Pluto will do to the rest of the boys who escaped the bus. Or what will happen to those you stayed on the bus.
4/30/21, 8:42 PM
this is so fucking hot and exactly the kind of thing that i hoped would happen after reading the last one.
3/3/21, 12:20 AM
Please Continue!

4/30/21, 6:07 PM
@Cutlerfan Chapter 2 is coming today! I have the full arc finished on my Patreon if you don't want to wait. I am only publishing one story/ chapter a month to the site.

4/30/21, 7:53 PM
@DuskSkullKing good to know, looking forewords to today's update
4/30/21, 5:34 PM
Such an incredibly hot chapter!

4/30/21, 6:06 PM
Aw shucks, @Hypnoguy67! Very kind of you to say!