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Apr 28, 2021
4/28/21, 10:09 PM
I love the concept behind this story and enjoyed it very much! I hope you do continue with a series on this. There are many different ways/extremes one could be considered 'dumb', and it'd be neat to explore that within a Geneius Barber universe!

4/28/21, 10:25 PM
@boyn2changes I am glad you enjoyed it! I'm not well versed on this site just yet but feel free to leave suggestions to future stories. I have hardly written anything due to a lack of inspiration so if you have any good ideas feel free to throw them out there!!!

Drake Nightstorm
4/29/21, 12:45 AM
@Bramurai everyone needs inspiration. Hit me up sometime on Discord or email.

4/29/21, 6:55 AM
@Drake Nightstorm

4/29/21, 7:40 AM
@Bramurai What is your Discord @Drake Nightstorm?
Anonymous
4/29/21, 6:58 AM
Jeez this is hot af I came twice to just the first chapter, saving second chapter for tomorrow's jerkoff~
Anonymous
4/29/21, 3:25 AM
fun and sexy!!! the bulk of the story was very hot of course, but honestly you had me at mike giving the tv little good luck smooches. i fully giggled out loud at that
4/27/21, 12:40 AM
Any news or updates on the next chapter(s)?

4/28/21, 3:56 AM
@KnyghtStalker Not sure, this year has been one crisis after another so far. Between keeping older relatives safe, getting them vaccinated, and a death in the family at the end of last year (old age not the virus) that we haven't been able to deal with until everyone got their shots I haven't had the focus or energy to work on the story for more then a couple of minutes a day. What I have is mostly scattered scenes that were on my mind when I got a moment to myself, the ending which is mostly done, and the cleaned up bit that was the beginning of the original upload which will be either chapter three or four. Chapter two is partially done, but my muse is currently failing to create the missing parts. Hopefully things will calm down next month and I'll be able to devote some time to working on the story.

4/29/21, 3:09 AM
@Johntheedoe The delays are understandable given everything that is going on. Just happy to hear that you did not decide to stop developing the story.
Apr 28, 2021
4/29/21, 3:00 AM
I really liked this story. I love to see more for sure. I was thinking the next guy turns into a twink to the point that he shrinks out of his cloths.
blankbot
4/29/21, 1:03 AM
This is a great story!
4/29/21, 12:07 AM
My first story on this site was a dog story. I made mistakes. But the story was well received as yours seems to be. I liked it and glad you ventured into writing. Keep up the good work and let the criticisms improve your work. And let's write some more dog stories!! Woof!
Anonymous
4/28/21, 11:16 PM
Man I love this story
4/28/21, 10:48 PM
great story so far.....would love to read more.....very interesting (although I'm not really into foot fetish), i would like to c more fetishes {maybe a different fetish: ex. a fat fetish, hypnotism fetish, bondage fetish etc....} but all in all if this was being rated out of five stars i would give this chapter 4.5
4/27/21, 11:59 PM
Thanks for collaborating to write such an incredibly hot story. That was amazing!

4/28/21, 10:43 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thanks for reading!