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4/27/21, 1:41 PM
The adding of the brothers is a nice touch
davesub
4/27/21, 12:07 PM
definitely hot!! can't stop thinking about it.
4/27/21, 10:41 AM
The addition of the brawling brothers was indeed distracting. The flow of this part isn't as smooth as the previous one. They obviously helped to move the story along, and they're more beefcake under Dr X's spell, but now I kind of want to know why the youngest brother is "couldn't get it up" and I feel like the Dr dismissed both brothers too early. There will be a reason the the other two brawl so much, and it usually is attention seeking from the younger sibling... The prospects of the Doc going gradually through the whole team are of course very exciting! Overall this story is really very good! More down the line of what I'd enjoy about a hypno story.
4/27/21, 9:36 AM
Hope you will continue this series. So fucking hot.
4/27/21, 9:01 AM
Love the concept, and while I tend to be a minority on here, I do love these kinds of stories where infected start to lose masculine traits, becoming leaner, lose body hair, and the like. Still, look forward to reading the next chapter.
Anonymous
4/27/21, 8:02 AM
For the writer of this story: when will the next chapter be available?
4/27/21, 6:52 AM
I'm loving this, nerdy, awareness, and the potential for extreme cock and cum situations? fantastic
4/27/21, 5:29 AM
really loving this story!
M_S
4/27/21, 4:07 AM
Inspired at all by the Scott Meyer book series?
4/27/21, 4:01 AM
What a fun story! I love that Willem and Jake seem to be drifting together emotionally as well as continuing their hot physical encounters. You’re doing a terrific job developing them as characters we actually care about and empathize with – especially the little twat Willem who I now actually want to see get his HEA. And of course sweet Jake who I’d love to see a little magic from our favorite Drag Witch prod into becoming a (still lovable) hottie. Count me amongst those anxiously waiting to learn about the discarded note, too!