Recent Comments

4/28/21, 12:09 AM
Well, that escalated quickly! :)
Jon
4/27/21, 11:47 PM
Can't wait to figure out what he will do with all 3 brothers. Along with the 1 here already has, and if he will keep him?
4/27/21, 11:20 PM
Loved it. Way raunchier than I usually enjoy but the dirty talk was just too good.
4/27/21, 11:08 PM
Dear God! I want that spreadsheet!
blankbot
4/27/21, 9:31 PM
Incredible writing. Nicely done.
4/27/21, 9:07 PM
I'll read this properly after class. Can't wait.
4/27/21, 3:38 PM
Very hot story, love the extra cock cheese content in this one
4/27/21, 1:41 PM
The adding of the brothers is a nice touch
davesub
4/27/21, 12:07 PM
definitely hot!! can't stop thinking about it.
4/27/21, 10:41 AM
The addition of the brawling brothers was indeed distracting. The flow of this part isn't as smooth as the previous one. They obviously helped to move the story along, and they're more beefcake under Dr X's spell, but now I kind of want to know why the youngest brother is "couldn't get it up" and I feel like the Dr dismissed both brothers too early. There will be a reason the the other two brawl so much, and it usually is attention seeking from the younger sibling... The prospects of the Doc going gradually through the whole team are of course very exciting! Overall this story is really very good! More down the line of what I'd enjoy about a hypno story.