Recent Comments

4/27/21, 3:05 AM
Hey Free Thinker -- I'm glad you are so much on the same page as this story's fantasy. Hope it got/kept you hard!
4/27/21, 2:42 AM
This totally rocks. Please, write more!
4/27/21, 2:35 AM
Dumbing down is not even one of my turn-ons, but the mental transformation here, and its final (??) step, is one of the hottest mind-control sequences I've read. Once again, poor Charlie! But lucky us that you're dreaming up such a sizzling hard fate for your protagonist, DikThik!
Jul 23, 2019
4/27/21, 2:34 AM
Great fantasy transformation to harden a reader's cock.
4/27/21, 2:27 AM
The bandanna is totally and completely cum-worthy. It's one of the hottest mind-altering scenes I've ever read!! Lucky, lucky Charlie...
4/27/21, 2:22 AM
The things Phillipe is doing to Charles/Charlie are sooo HOT! The crotch-modification is incredible!
4/27/21, 2:13 AM
This is crazy-hot! The transformation, the forced conversion... The mounting addiction of Charlie to stroking himself in front of his new-found Voodoo bros... It's amazing!
4/27/21, 2:03 AM
This is terrific. The step by step enticement and then modification of Charles is amazingly well-drawn -- and really hot!
boi98229
4/26/21, 8:04 PM
Great imagination and hot story, but...! i am perhaps a bit odd in my preferences for erotic story reading. For me the context and the details of the process of seduction, domination, and control are what make the sex scenes have some depth and make them so much more erotic. It's a little like comparing a quick escapade between strangers in the bar restroom versus waiting until after sharing dinner, walking the beach, and sharing conversation over a drink before getting it on. For me the character development and the relationship development makes the sex so much more interesting. Without it, we may as well just have a really fast fuck and get on with our lives without dwelling on it so much. Granted, in this case the colorful goop, and and strange goings on in the locker room definitely added some interest, but I kept waiting for Liam to get caught up in it, and that never really happened in this chapter. That all said, it was a very interesting opening, which sets us up for the hotter escapades to come.

4/27/21, 12:14 AM
Hi there! Thank you for your input! I do agree that sex part do need some proper lead in, and I understand that you might feel a bit disappointed by Liam not getting any action. However, in this story, I only wanted to use Liam as the perspective tool, as this is still only a prologue-ish foundation for future story. If I ever get to finish the later story, Liam will definitely get more action, as he's already been introduced and set up, and I'll make sure it'll be more 'hypnotising' ! Thank you again for your input, I really appreciate it! @boi98229
4/26/21, 11:14 PM
Amazing story. You're best by far. Although I do wish that our jungle boy ends up with a happy ending outside of the hypno. He's been such a fun stud that it would be a shame that he only enjoys it when he's completely out of it.