Recent Comments

4/25/21, 3:10 PM
This is a great setup and awesome that it’s not instant one winner takes all. There’s enough hints of stuff that Wes or Xav could figure out what’s going on. Xav in particular could start tweaking things and making the connections. And it’s possible that the fields move differently sometimes because someone else somewhere is tweaking them. Or that the spreadsheet really does have its own mind. Be great to have more sex :) Aaron hasn’t taken advantage yet to sleep with anyone. Or enlarge his equipment or libido and go hook up.
4/25/21, 2:59 PM
hope to read more to the story.....interested in finding out more
4/25/21, 1:44 PM
would love to know/read more.....
Hole4yu
4/25/21, 1:30 PM
I like the beginning, I would like to see more mention of the witched handcuffs .
4/25/21, 1:30 PM
Really enjoyed this chapter and the self-experimentation to get it right. Some amazing physical descriptions and mental reactions in here -- love the interiority!
4/25/21, 1:16 PM
He better put Xav's ks value up quick before he notices!
4/25/21, 1:05 PM
When Fabian brought out the legal contract I started squirting a big load. So hot. Wish there was a chapter three where he had to livr through the promises made in the contract
4/25/21, 11:15 AM
Oh man the plot thickens! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Anonymous
4/25/21, 8:00 AM
great work
Anonymous
4/25/21, 4:35 AM
Dear Edlam, your story is very hot! And I prefer more story likes this. Keep going! I like to read about the brainwashing in family.