Recent Comments

4/25/21, 1:44 PM
would love to know/read more.....
Hole4yu
4/25/21, 1:30 PM
I like the beginning, I would like to see more mention of the witched handcuffs .
4/25/21, 1:30 PM
Really enjoyed this chapter and the self-experimentation to get it right. Some amazing physical descriptions and mental reactions in here -- love the interiority!
4/25/21, 1:16 PM
He better put Xav's ks value up quick before he notices!
4/25/21, 1:05 PM
When Fabian brought out the legal contract I started squirting a big load. So hot. Wish there was a chapter three where he had to livr through the promises made in the contract
4/25/21, 11:15 AM
Oh man the plot thickens! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Anonymous
4/25/21, 8:00 AM
great work
Anonymous
4/25/21, 4:35 AM
Dear Edlam, your story is very hot! And I prefer more story likes this. Keep going! I like to read about the brainwashing in family.
4/25/21, 2:54 AM
This story is incredibly well-written. I love the character development of and relationship between Willem and Jake. Looking forward to the next chapter...
Anonymous
4/24/21, 11:26 AM
this series keeps getting better. i hope you continue it for while

4/25/21, 2:47 AM
Totally delighted by all the encouraging comments!! @