Recent Comments

4/23/21, 9:25 AM
what a fun world. this is incredibly hot. great development. keep writing!
4/23/21, 8:16 AM
ooooooooooh,THAT will be good! Amazing premisse,great first chapter
4/23/21, 7:49 AM
INCREDIBLE. I love every twist and turn! I also love that Willem hasn't lost all of the things that cursed him in the first place--he's still self-absorbed, selfish, and willing to use people so long as he gets what he wants...in fact the spell seems to be making things *worse* in that regard. Jake seems to be the unknown factor, though--I love that he got a chance to take down the homophobic bullies here. But love, that's a harder thing to fix...
Jack
4/23/21, 5:53 AM
I like the possibilities here. Good opening setup, and I'm genuinely excited to read the rest!
4/23/21, 4:04 AM
Hmmm sounds familiar: https://dilbert.com/strip/1990-08-18
4/23/21, 2:13 AM
I hope it's Red bird back for more!
4/23/21, 1:28 AM
Nice to see another one of your stories.
Rubber_Lover14
4/22/21, 11:51 PM
Im not gonna lie, this was amazing. Hot as fuck. It would be super cool if there were feet involved in the future. But either way, this was amazing. Cant wait for the next part!
Anonymous
4/22/21, 10:38 PM
Loved this first chapter. And definitely looking forward to reading more.
Anonymous
4/22/21, 10:19 PM
Absolutely confused the hell out of me with all this spreadsheet talk, but I think that's the point so I'm lookin forward to where this goes!