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offeringservice26
4/22/21, 6:44 PM
Fun! Great writing and story development. I love cum control and glad you plan to continue.
4/22/21, 6:16 PM
Very well-written and excellent description of his hypnotic session. Looking forward to equally detailed subsequent chapters!
MKT
4/22/21, 2:52 PM
part 2 please
4/22/21, 12:48 PM
This story gets better with every chapter. Great work.
Anonymous
4/22/21, 11:04 AM
excellent
4/22/21, 10:40 AM
Very good story, I loved how you explained the process of how it was hypnotizing him I can't wait to see how the story continues. uwu
4/22/21, 9:09 AM
you are earnestly just a great writer. but man do you make a hot story as well. i love it when a new talented writer shows up! great series so far!
4/22/21, 6:54 AM
I was not expecting that, Daniel being turned into The Sheriff - A thumbs up from me
2/21/21, 3:27 AM
Hey Man. Really enjoyed the story. Definitely wanted to stick with it to the end. I was figuring it was gonna be straight-to-gay story.

4/22/21, 6:03 AM
@DikThik there is still time for him to go gay.....
Muscle-Flex
2/20/21, 3:39 AM
This was excellent! Nicely paced. Hot descriptions of each scene. Mike's dialog was both hilarious and hot. Spot on. Glad to hear you are going to continue the story. Mike is in for some rough seas on this cruise! Looking forward to his next predicament and what happens when he begins to figure out what is going on... that is, if it isn't too late for him to do anything about it. Whatever will his fiancee say If she finds out?

4/22/21, 6:02 AM
@Muscle-Flex she won't be happy :-)