Recent Comments

3/22/21, 11:58 AM
very hot and well written! super excited for further Mike humiliation and what you've got in store for him. - after these gym session he has to wash the gym gear provided to the participants...maybe suck each jockstrap clean with his mouth before he can lead them into the wash...of course guys get wind of this and leave him some surprises knowing he'll be licking whatever is left - maybe he is made to work a glory hole stall. The jock must to service two holes at once, one with his mouth and the other with his jock-puss. - is humiliated “anonymously” servicing so much dick...but does or doesn’t realize the bathroom has cameras and is broadcasting his work online. - keep up the great story and thank you!

4/21/21, 2:14 PM
@jkstrapme I will be going in a different direction. I hope you like it ;-)
Tfb
3/3/21, 5:47 PM
This checks almost every box for me and I love it

4/21/21, 2:13 PM
@Tfb thanks :-)
Muscle-Flex
3/4/21, 1:42 AM
Damn, this was good. Another excellent chapter. It was the perfect revenge scenario for setting Mike up for more trouble. The scenes in the changing room at the little shop were hot, especially Mike's helplessness and his confusion over what was happening... the way our narrator makes Mike look at him at the critical moment. Gary provided some comedy. And the outfit Mike will now have to wear to the gym. Heh heh heh. I can't wait to see what happens at one of Mike's personal training sessions. When he shows his clients what exercises will work which muscles best, I suppose they might understand better if they can feel each particular muscle he is talking about... on his own body. Uh oh... trouble ahead for Mike! Great job with this chapter! Thanks!

4/21/21, 2:12 PM
@Muscle-Flex thank you for the nice and well put comment. you are really getting the idea behind it
Jul 4, 2016
4/21/21, 6:44 AM
I’m late to the party but I loved this story! I agree with other commenters that a boy should be what his master wants, even if he is a freak.

screamingmoist
4/21/21, 12:41 PM
@KinkyNickInSea Thanks! "A Trip to the Cabin" has similar changes taking place if you're in the mood for more.
4/21/21, 10:46 AM
want to know more....how is this going to end
BearBoi
4/21/21, 5:34 AM
Jakey's having a tough time-- i'm hoping he does find the daddy of his dreams some day soon and he doesn't get TOO much trouble from all this. in a way, it was almost comfy and reassuring that Doug here is such a... bro. He just seems like a nice friend (with benefits) to Jake. the twinges of mental/sexuality changes and the memories coming to him are pretty hot, and him just dealing with the difference of perspective of being a smaller gayer bitch-boi.
BearBoi
4/21/21, 4:37 AM
when you change speakers in a dialogue scene, you make a new paragraph. it's difficult to read like this.
Elm
4/21/21, 3:39 AM
Cute, intriguing and funny!
4/20/21, 8:38 PM
Would love to read more of this

4/21/21, 2:20 AM
Glad you like it! @Anon529373
4/20/21, 6:50 PM
wow, that was on if the hottest and best stories I ever read. Please continue it :)

4/21/21, 2:19 AM
Thank you so much for your kind word, I'm flattered haha, and yeah I hope I'll write more of it in the future! @jade